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~ sequence of haiku ~ late arrival everyone asleep quiet as can be fat june bugs flutter in the dark of night all too excited ignoring this swarm of june bugs we put up our tent one of us filling his pockets for tomorrow’s bait clear skies and waters when sun rises fishing lines are cast AP: 1st place 2021, Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on February 23, 2022 for contest THE NIGHT SKY sponsored by ANNA MARIE KAIANAH - RANKED 2ND and on April 17, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (APR 18) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on March 4, 2021

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Date: 5/6/2022 10:20:00 AM
As the wife of a fisherman, this is an all together familiar scene! Nicely written Line. Love haiku strings! Congratulations. Blessings.
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Date: 5/6/2022 1:11:00 PM
Oh yes, based on true events ~ thanks for your visit and comment, Sam.
Date: 5/1/2022 7:00:00 AM
Short and beautiful. Congratulations!
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Date: 5/1/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj ~
Date: 5/1/2022 12:25:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Line! <3 ~Anna Kaianah
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Date: 5/1/2022 8:13:00 AM
Thank you very much, Anna ~

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