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Judgment

J ust feeling stipped and naked U nderstanding is what I desire D espair at always feeling like the freak G etting sad as my spirits sink M aking the most of everyday E veryone looking down from their pedestal N ever feeling good enough T aking it day by day

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Date: 7/1/2009 1:25:00 PM
Wonderful Acrostic Illyianna, well crafted>>James
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Date: 5/17/2009 5:32:00 PM
awesome write......
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Date: 5/3/2009 1:28:00 PM
Tell me why-line-D? There are no real pedestals. Only man made ones. Only God counts and He doesn't put anyone above another. We are all equal in His eyes. And, we are NOT supposed to judge. There is a lot of emotion in this acrostic. It's nicely meaningful. Love, Dane
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Date: 4/29/2009 7:31:00 AM
Well said and I know that is sooo you!!! We love you and if no one else appreciates your dark and creepy writing we at least do....LOL we are freaks...LOL love ya!!!
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Date: 4/29/2009 5:49:00 AM
Absolutely, perfectly, said. But if they don't like you or your poems, f*ck 'em!!!! Love ya Dreary Leerie
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