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Joy and Melancholy Premiere Contest Winner

It’s joy that rules my pen most days. So richly blessed, I’m one who prays when life presents a daunting test or obstacles obscure my quest, attempting to purloin my zest. I write of faith and family, of birds I hear and blooms I see, of friends I’ve known for fifty years, of working days and kindred peers, of loving life as sunset nears. But life is more than penning rhymes describing joyous, peaceful times and basking in sweet memories. My other muse does not appease my need for peace and perfect ease. When melancholy bids me write, I tell of loss and heartbreak’s bite, of lonely times that come and go, of masks I wear to hide my woe till joy brings optimism’s glow. April 10, 2021 written for the Reveal Your Other Muse Poetry Contest Placed 1st, premium contest sponsored by Margarita Lillico April 12, 2021 placed first in Brian Strand's All Yours (Apr 12) Contest

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Date: 4/27/2021 6:30:00 AM
Big congratulations on your number one gold winner. Well done
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Date: 4/23/2021 1:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A wonderful write. Have a blessed day/weekend writing away..............
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/24/2021 12:35:00 PM
Thanks a million, Paula. Janice
Date: 4/23/2021 9:30:00 AM
Congrats on your top win!! A beautiful poem with great rhyme!!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/24/2021 12:34:00 PM
Thanks so much, Krish. Janice
Date: 4/22/2021 11:29:00 AM
Congratulations!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2021 5:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Christuraj. Janice
Date: 4/22/2021 7:55:00 AM
Awesome write with great rhymes and wonderful flow. I enjoyed it and want to congratulate you on the awesome win. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2021 5:26:00 PM
Gina, thanks a million! Janice
Date: 4/22/2021 5:45:00 AM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing a part of you through this muse, wondrously expressed in in your awesome poetic style. God bless you. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/22/2021 5:57:00 AM
Beata, thanks a million! You are very kind. Janice
Date: 4/14/2021 8:21:00 PM
A great poem about life and writing. Beautiful! Congratulations Janice!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/21/2021 8:48:00 PM
THANK you so much, George. Janice
Date: 4/13/2021 11:02:00 PM
Ahhh!! I hope that your bad days don't come by often. Reads like a good contender in the contest to me. Way to go and congrats for the placement in Brian's contest. Thanks for the visit with congrats. Sara
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/14/2021 7:01:00 AM
Thanks so much, Sara. Good days outweigh bad! :-) Janice
Date: 4/13/2021 2:22:00 PM
You excel with your words in whatever genre of poetry you pen, love this write Janice and congrats on your win:-)hugs Jan xx
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/13/2021 9:09:00 PM
Jan, you are very kind! Thank you so much. Janice
Date: 4/13/2021 12:05:00 AM
I would say this is one of your best writes that I've read to date Janice. Wonderful cadence, meaningful and very deserving of its 1st place in Brian's competition. Cheers - Gary
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/13/2021 5:11:00 PM
Gary, THANKS a million! Janice
Date: 4/12/2021 7:11:00 PM
Janice this is a really nice write! Enjoyed it! Lonna
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/12/2021 8:12:00 PM
Thanks so much, Lonna. Janice
Date: 4/12/2021 3:54:00 PM
This is so well penned, Janice. Even if the 'rhymes aren't everything,' 'quest...purloined zest' -- Wow!... And as for the 'darker side,' so well depicted. A winner in my book! :) gw
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/12/2021 8:11:00 PM
Gershon, you are so kind! Janice
Date: 4/12/2021 2:05:00 AM
We all try and write joyful poems but then sometimes the dark side of life rises and inspires us. The reality is we cant sugarcoat everything in life. Tom
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/12/2021 8:11:00 PM
So true. Thanks so much, Tom. Janice
Date: 4/11/2021 9:27:00 PM
Love the rhythmical rhyming verse, Janice.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/12/2021 8:09:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve. Janice
Date: 4/11/2021 11:54:00 AM
Well done, Janice! Aloha! Rico
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/11/2021 1:17:00 PM
Thanks so much, Rico. Janice
Date: 4/11/2021 6:00:00 AM
Wonderful contrast you depicted between joy and melancholy, Janice. Indeed life is more than joy and peaceful times. I like the turn in third stanza. Life is a balance!
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/11/2021 1:19:00 PM
Thanks so much, Vijay. Janice
Date: 4/10/2021 11:46:00 PM
This was a fun poem to read. You have great descriptiveness and rhyming in this piece.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 4/11/2021 5:31:00 AM
Thanks so much, Robert. Janice

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