Joy

You stand at the line The mix of hate and love from the crowd jump in your brain The feelings of arrogance from the other team crowd your mind. The feelings of depression from your teammates put more weight on your shoulders. You run and run, ignoring the pressure. In the aftermath there is only one emotion left. Joy.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/20/2016 11:14:00 AM

Usman H, Welcome to Poetry soup, I hope you enjoy the community. Here, you will find friendly poets who enjoy supporting one another. I myself, enjoy reading and commenting those who want to be read. The only time I give constructive criticism is when a poet desires it. However, if for some reason the poem is not my field I will guide you to someone who is more qualified than I. Stop by and read one of my poems if you like. My poems are not perfect, but I have a feeling you might like one. I encourage you to check out the contest page and read to receive comments. Tell me a little about your poetic skills if you like. It will be my pleasure to follow and read every poem you post from here on :) HAPPY HOLIDAYS. Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Honestly J.T.

Date: 12/13/2016 7:23:00 PM

True indeed. Good poem and Welcome to Poetry Soup -JT