Journey's End

Sailing on a stormy sea
With the acceptance
That I’m not in control,
No idea where this is going to end
A free spirited roam

Over waves
Slipping and sliding,
Struggling to stay adrift
Gulping salty water
As soon as I enter 

The fear of drowning 
Being my only thought 
Visions of my life gone by
Is replaying itself in my mind
The feeling of not being ready 

Not being able 
To let go is overwhelming 
I still need to find my niche
I still need to tell people 
I love them

I still need to stand 
On top of that mountain
Look down and say: ‘I’ve made it”
Gasping for air
Frantically waving my arms

Hoping and praying
Someone will see me
My last thought as I drift 
Further and
Further…
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devonshire Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 10:07 AM
The storm of life provides us with many struggles to overcome, Wilma. I like the analogy of our journey through life to this voyage through a turbulent sea. (As a deep-sea fishing fan, your poem recalled a stormy night when I wasn't sure I could make it back to shore.) Love the way you look down from the mountain and proclaim: "I've made it." Awesome poem! Love, Carolyn
Conway Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 9:12 AM
Don't lose yourself, seize control!~Tirzah~
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