Journey From Exile

The journey to rescue my soul began in your eyes
where I traveled for hours
in a warm wondrous afterglow of emotion
trying to find the unguarded gate of your heart's invitation
to come in from a cold world
where you found me a hungry, thirsty, traveler
in self-imposed exile, drifting on dark winds
  like a flower with broken petals tumbling away
to leave an empty brown stem, burning away in the sunlight
where the tearful cry of a heartbeat is heard
in the solitary sound of loneliness, 
  along with emotions of misery
that endures my lingering death of echos

from this...you have given me a reason
to hear the lost melody of my soul
as I lay in your eyes, a prisoner of your kindness
  held by your tender embrace
where my long nightmarish journey has ended

as I search through the distance between our eyes
I find an unmeasurable treasure
where my long road disappeared
and my soul began to reach out
to be tethered to the west winds of your heart
as the stillness of time smoldered
   in the dewy mist of my traveled yearning

3/20/22
contest Form -J
sponsor Constance La France

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Date: 3/26/2022 6:40:00 PM
Frederic, congratulations on your win in my Just Write Me A Poem contest, wonderful and I love your beautiful music too ~Constance
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/26/2022 6:42:00 PM
Thank you, Constance, for your kindness and interesting contests
Date: 3/24/2022 9:14:00 PM
" prisoner of your kindness" - Great. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/26/2022 6:44:00 PM
Thank you Christuraj for all your kind remarks
Date: 3/24/2022 4:30:00 PM
Beautiful poem, Frederic. I loved this line especially: "to be tethered to the west winds of your heart." This is quite a love poem. Congratulations on First!
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/26/2022 6:43:00 PM
Thank you Ann
Date: 3/22/2022 8:31:00 AM
Great entry for the contest, Frederic. Your imagery and descriptions are exquisite. The rhythm of the poem is also excellent. I enjoy reading everything you write. Write On! my friend, Write On! Bill
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Frederic Parker
Date: 3/26/2022 6:43:00 PM
thank you Bill
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