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In the falling snow, I came across a bare tree Filled with a flock of small birds Sitting on branches They were united, waiting For their next flight in journey Heidi Sands 2/13/20

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Alexis Y.

Date: 2/14/2020 9:47:00 AM

Hi Heidi, You have painted a lovely image with words! Happy Valentine’s Day! Have a great weekend:-) Alexis

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/14/2020 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Alexis. I appreciate your kind comment. Have a great day :)

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 2/14/2020 3:54:00 AM

I love to see a flock of birds all flying in unison. This is lovely Heidi. Happy Valentine's Day my friend! xxoo

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/14/2020 9:53:00 AM

Thank you Connie. Happy Valentines Day to you too :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 2/14/2020 2:43:00 AM

A beautiful winter scene Heidi. Tom

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/14/2020 9:52:00 AM

Thank you Tom :) Happy Valentines Day !

Vijay Pandit

Date: 2/13/2020 4:23:00 PM

A moment well captured on the face of winter!

Heidi Sands
Date: 2/13/2020 4:28:00 PM

Thank you Vijay. I hope you are having a nice day :)