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Journal - the Last Few - I

JOURNAL The Last Few – I This piece of solidity Sitting atop a transparent world, See-through only because Stability seems fixed Head back trying to think, A sense of blood pumping, A flash that cups the hands. The last few will be searching When one cannot understand life Then one goes within, Within where absence softens. Yet even then stiffness remains

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/10/2014 6:57:00 AM
i like this Daver, i will eventually get through all of these...
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Date: 7/2/2014 5:51:00 PM
This is deepppppp one Daver.How are you doin anyway my old friend. Hope all is well with you. bfn. Lainie
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Date: 6/30/2014 3:07:00 PM
oh yes, I remember this one. I really like that last verse of it, DAver!
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Date: 6/28/2014 5:54:00 PM
Hi Dave-r..Sounds like you are troubled..love the work though. I spend quiet a bit of time"within". BG
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Date: 6/28/2014 5:10:00 PM
Daver, if this is number 1 then roll on number 20, does anyone understand what life throws at us....very well written...David
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