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Jolted By Twilight

 
twilight falls over me like a wave
the dimness wraps around me like a cloak
the colors inspire me poetically
all those streaks and tones of purple, blue, 
and pink mingling, swirling,merging 
overcoming my consciousness
I am mindful and aware of each ebb and flow
jolted, amazed, and astonished, aware
no matter how many times I have experience a sunset
each time is a lofty show painted by God
as his paint brush drips with hues dramatic
they drip not defined, not perfect, yet exquisite
twilight is a poetic time of day
a peaceful, calmness, soothing to the soul
so stunning I am jolted by twilight 
and the sky is the most meaningful of the day

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Michael Tor Date: 11/5/2024 4:27:00 PM Such a peaceful easy feeling experiencing Twilight, a calming soothing affect that is good for the soul. Loved reading this one from you Constance it had a soothing affect on me when reading. Hugs... Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 11/5/2024 6:22:00 PM Michael, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, Constance

Abdullah Alhemaidy Date: 11/5/2024 12:14:00 PM Hi Constance :-) Nice read! The last line is very interesting! Login to Reply Constance La France Date: 11/5/2024 12:49:00 PM AA, thank you for the compliment, and for the comment, I like that line too, Constance