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John John

Don’t let guilt be the drive that takes you away from sanity! Eventually everything you feel emotionally will be set free. Honestly I never thought I’d care so much that you’re gone But, I miss you and I know now that I’m wrong… Why did god have to take you away? Couldn’t he see you’re still needed here? Mom needs you and so do your kids. Dad pretends not to care but inside the feelings exist. Why did you leave, you should’ve fought harder to stay alive. We miss you as the days go by. I see your face every time I close my eyes. But it’s not the same without you here today. With you gone the days just fade away..

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 3/2/2012 7:04:00 AM
Imsorry for your loss. Very nice dedication.Ioften write about love and loss. Its hard to write about death and loss so I appreciate the creativity that comes from that sorrow and pain. Nice job
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Sarah Moncada
Date: 3/3/2012 12:15:00 PM
I also write about love and loss but since my brothers death and my cousins as well, death and loss have been my inpiration. Thank you
Date: 2/3/2012 10:42:00 AM
Sad and lovely poem Saah. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Sarah Moncada
Date: 2/3/2012 10:43:00 AM
thank you.

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