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Joe and Ann Downsize

Ghosts of the past wander Through rooms dusty, too hard to keep. Joe and Ann remember when they were new. Heavy burgundy drapes still hang in Joe’s library, Where will his books go when he is through Picking and choosing the loved ones to keep? Fifty years ago, Ann loved the roses; Roses on cream wallpaper And a lace trimmed lamp. Now they nearly choke her, and She’ll gladly say goodbye for Light and space and ease. Those etched glass door panels will Follow them to their duplex, To add a bit of nostalgic elegance. Voices of children echo but They never come home anymore, One little guest bedroom will do. Joe and Ann walk hand in hand With a well-up of tears, but Know they’ll be happier when They make the break from Old fashioned years to downsize, And rock away in the twilight.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/8/2018 6:08:00 AM
Sunlite, I had to control my sense of wanting to "hate downsizing." The books left to the greasy hands of the future computer-obsessed hearts, got to me. A powerful write ... sad, but we have ways to accept "weeled-up tears" and yet walk hand in hand, as this Universal Man & Woman do. LORD, help us be transformed. shalom, shalom Dear Sister SW
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/8/2018 9:49:00 AM
I loved your comment! Downsizing is a "Catch 22." Thanks for your insight.
Date: 6/6/2018 11:43:00 AM
Know the feeling, terrific write Sunlite...
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/8/2018 9:48:00 AM
Thanks for identifying and commenting, Charlie.
Date: 6/6/2018 2:18:00 AM
Sadly I am there now ,the kid's all gone, rooms to spare, maybe I should downsize too, definitely one to mull over.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/8/2018 9:46:00 AM
I'm not gonna downsize unless I'm carried out. Don't want to use up what I have for expensive alternatives. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 6/5/2018 6:42:00 PM
HelloSunlite Wanter, I just read your beautiful poem. It must have been hard to move on. There must have been lots of memories in that house. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 6/8/2018 9:45:00 AM
I haven't moved on yet, Darlene. It's fiction about so many my age who are. Thanks for commenting.
Date: 6/5/2018 5:55:00 PM
This is so nice and what a great ending! Rock away in the twilight! :)
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