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the avenue lurks in darkness- my departure waits ‘till morn _______________ For Brian's contest

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/18/2010 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's "Broken Monoku" contest James. May you have many more contest wins. Love, Carol

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 5/12/2010 3:34:00 AM

I love this one, Jamsey. Excellent writing! Congratulations on placing in Brian’s Broken Monoku contest with this wonderful line. It's easy to see why you did so well. Your creativity shines. Smiles, DAS-J

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/6/2010 3:52:00 AM

Good morning, and good luck in the contest, nicely done, yes stay put till the morning,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2010 3:21:00 PM

I really LIKE THIS!! Big congrats to you. LUv, andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/5/2010 12:51:00 PM

An awesome win for you to celebrate, Jimbo. Congratulations on your well-deserved honor. Love, Carolyn

Joyce Johnson

Date: 5/5/2010 8:03:00 AM

Congratulations on your third place in this fun contest. Love, Joyce

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/5/2010 6:02:00 AM

congrats on the win

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/5/2010 5:01:00 AM

Congrats Jimbo on your winning poem in Brian's contest.. with this great Monoku.. have a happy day and enjoy your very special win ..thankxxx for your sweet comments on my poetry always.. with luv from the "Sweetheart"

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/5/2010 4:57:00 AM

Great win James..congrats to you -Robert

Gert W. Knop

Date: 5/4/2010 3:30:00 PM

We should never leave in darkness and always wait for the first sun light! Nicely penned Monoku, Jimbo! And thanks for your comments...Gert

Rachel W

Date: 5/4/2010 3:03:00 PM

To me, this feels like the anticipation before a big event. It covers so much emotion in just two lines. AWESOME, James. *hugs* Rachel

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/4/2010 4:54:00 AM

Sounds like the right decision...Interesting monoku that should do well in the contest..Good luck..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 5/3/2010 7:21:00 AM

the sweetest think!!

David Byrne

Date: 5/2/2010 6:31:00 PM

nice one!

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/2/2010 9:51:00 AM

A winner. one of the best James...take care..Charma

Carrie Richards

Date: 5/2/2010 9:46:00 AM

Love it!! All kinds of images come to mind...just what Brian wanted in this contest...I'm sure!! (ps...as to the senryu contest...you shouldn't scrap your poem....you never know how the judging will go...angel or not...it could have been a winner! These contests are always a surprise waiting to happen!! :)

Anthony Nutter

Date: 5/2/2010 7:09:00 AM

Excellent submission for Brian's contest, a winner I'm sure. TY for commenting on Son of the Morning it was good to hear from you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2010 12:00:00 AM

GREAT one for you too, REally, one of the best I saw tonight. Goodnight now! andrea