Jimmy

Jimmy shaved his whole body and head
While tanning, fell asleep while he read
Sunscreen, he didn't put on -
didn't think he'd be out long
His bald areas, never looked so red
Copyright © | Year Posted 2026

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George Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 1:58 AM
So sad...! Poor Jimmy, on the beach, many such unanticipated things happen....!
Kitchin Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 3:24 AM
Valsa, thank you.
Andresen Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 1:52 AM
- Sounds painful ... totally tomato :))) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 3:24 AM
Anne-Lise, thanks for your visit.
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 12:20 AM
Great one, Tania. It could have served well in your own contest. Thanks for that fun contest and my placement in it
Kitchin Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 3:24 AM
Andrea, thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 11:21 PM
Lol poor Jimmy, I like the sun shine but don't sit out in direct sun, im more of a shade man. Tom
Kitchin Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 3:24 AM
Tom, thank you.
Smith nee Howarth Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 7:58 PM
Lol, this is so cool. Limericks can be so much fun.
Kitchin Avatar
July 20, 2026 at 3:25 AM
Alison, thank you.
Lane Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 11:50 AM
Jimmy wasn’t too bright except for the red spots on his bald head.
Kitchin Avatar
July 19, 2026 at 1:00 PM
Thanks, Lin.
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