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Jimi's Love Poem

I gaze into those beautiful eyes Your lips, they never tell me lies Do you wonder what's going on inside? What's this feeling I try so hard to hide You see right through me, see me as a whole Peer into my soul I am open and vulnerable Make me lose all control Do I dare Show how deeply I care? That anywhere I would go, as long as you were there All I ever truly wanted was already mine How could I have been so blind? Come to me and find a love so kind Burning blue, pure and true I feel the passion Inside of you Wake me up in your embrace Doesn't matter the time or place As long as I can see your face I crave you, your hands, your touch Only you can make me feel this rush True love is what I've found Beauty spoken without a sound His stare, his lips, his kiss Not a moment of this dare I miss The words you give to me, how could I forget? Being yours for a lifetime is something I could never regret

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/27/2014 7:46:00 PM
MARYANN, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile, others passed, when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your compositions. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Date: 8/20/2014 2:04:00 PM
such love and longing, welcome to poetrysoup Maryann, keep writing and enjoying this website :)
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Date: 8/20/2014 8:25:00 AM
I like the wake up call, Maryann,, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry:) Here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 8/20/2014 6:32:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Maryann - I choose your first lovely written poem - I like it - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/20/2014 1:29:00 AM
Beautiful, beautiful romantic write - love it! Pandita
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