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President John F Kennedy, made America space ready, shot when in the prime of his life, he died next to his loving wife! 1st placement written 17/11/2020 Brian Strand QUAT-RO 4 line contest 8 syllables each line AABB RHYME

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2020 4:43:00 PM

It was a sad day for our country. Well done, and congrats on the win.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 11/19/2020 3:42:00 PM

Perhaps not coincidence that you wrote this one day after Line watcher her beloved husband die... and the date was very close too: JFK's November 22; Dennis Gauthier's, November 16... Congrats too on your win in the contest. Happiness and Joy, Gershon

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/19/2020 6:44:00 AM

Hi Krish, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your 1st place win. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 11/17/2020 5:37:00 PM

A shame he didnt live to see his dream come true of putting a man on the moon. Good luck Hope you're well Krish. Tom

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/18/2020 12:10:00 AM

Tom thanks! Indeed, JFK was a terrible tragedy when we compare him to the current one refusing to go! I am well tha ks and hope you are too!! BW Krish

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/17/2020 1:00:00 PM

Hi Krish, This is a good entry for the contest. JFK was a good President. Jackie O, had to be a strong woman to witness such traumatic incident.He was gone too soon. Best wishes in the contest. Have a good day-Alexis

Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 11/17/2020 1:46:00 PM

Thanks Alexis! For your very kind words of support! I have been to Dallas and went through the scene many times to understand the tragedy of his untimely death! a brilliant man!