Jewels of Giza

oh, how the pyramid, does grow and grow.
how was i to know?
i signed that dotted line, in repose.
should have dotted i’s and crossed my legs.

my first hint arrived with labor pains.
i squatted jewels – diamond, ruby, emerald.
wore expert rings with the likes of dr. spock.
i devoured each sweet honey book.

but woe to me, i thought i’d suffer solely from “empty nest”.
those birds flew high and strong, then crooked and lopsided.
i wracked my brain, contemplated walking the plank.
sleepwalking, i found profundity, a book of eureka gold.

apparently,  there are experts in rearing “adult children”.
i furiously speed read, all the pages.  i scanned its horizon
for clues and answers.  they came with blue sky ribbons.
i slid to the floor, bewildered, wide-eyed, relieved.

then my children became experts, in rearing their own.
taught me how to use my adult voice - unlike a duck,
no squeaking allowed.  and how i should let them cry,
and let them fall.  who’d ever heard such crazy talk?

i’d still sign that dotted line, but with eyes open wide.
my husband and i reside at the precipice of the pyramid.
it quakes with birth pangs of shattered glass.
still, our family’s strong.  none will crumble.  none will fall.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Freie Avatar
September 5, 2025 at 12:02 PM
Hi Kim, I thought I'd see how you started this ride. Dang, you've been on this rollercoaster longer than I have. I'm still trying to deal with the "Dips" running this carnival attraction!
Wolf Avatar
February 28, 2024 at 7:56 PM
Always enjoy reading a friend's first poem on the Soup. Looks as if you're one of the few whose 'pyramid scheme' did not crumble. lol. ~ Nef R. T.T.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 29, 2024 at 6:27 AM
Thank you, Gershon! Honored that you read my first one! Cleo Pat Ra ;)
Horn Avatar
November 23, 2023 at 6:34 AM
What about your nose I suppose which grows and grows?
Rodrigues Avatar
November 24, 2023 at 6:16 AM
Wow…lol
Alhemaidy Avatar
September 16, 2023 at 1:59 PM
One of Kim's jewels!
Rodrigues Avatar
September 17, 2023 at 10:26 AM
Thank you! Seems so long since I wrote this one. Had fun reading it again and seeing what I was thinking back then. I appreciate you commenting.
Horsman Avatar
November 10, 2020 at 11:25 PM
Wow, your first post on soup, profound and a wonderful way with words. Like Freddie below, love reading first postings, this is truly a gem...
Rodrigues Avatar
November 11, 2020 at 4:14 AM
I like to do the same. Thank you so much, Harry!
Dietrich Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 3:28 PM
wow,Kim, I really enjoyed the metaphors in this poem. this one I completely got it. It was a splendid first poem you gave us at Soup!! (hope I got that right, that it was your first post)
Rodrigues Avatar
May 20, 2019 at 4:24 PM
I believe so. Thanks for reading :)
Robinson Jr. Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 1:36 PM
Exquisitely universal truths unearthed in this deliciously sublime poem, Kim. On many levels it hits home like a boomerang, again and again. Excellent poetry. I love reading a poet's earlier works. This was a joy to read. Love and peace.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 11, 2017 at 2:41 PM
Thank you, Freddy! :) Blessings, friend!
A  Avatar
April 29, 2016 at 11:22 AM
Beautiful read. Kim. SKAT
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Thank you!
A   Avatar
April 28, 2016 at 1:15 AM
Wow, this is a stunning write.. Kim, love the title and description of the message and meaning....Linda
Rodrigues Avatar
June 1, 2016 at 11:16 PM
Thank you!
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