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Jewels Ablaze

Leaves free falling and toying with the wind Rain turning streets to glossy mirrors Lined with colourful foliage bouquets Million shades of reds, oranges and golds Tiny momentary opening in a steel grey sky Sun piercing blatantly and triumphantly Through frigid domineering clouds Setting aglow if only for an instant This wet wild wonderful vibrant palette Expecting a rainbow that just won’t come Steady persistent rain throughout till night Finally gives way to dark overcast morning skies Still heavy with dark gloomy menacing clouds For just another blessed moment The sun shines defiantly releasing A supernatural blanket of jewels ablaze Abruptly snatching our breath away For that one little fleeting moment Wishing the magic would last forever AP: Honorable Mention 2022 Submitted to contest PREMIERE NO.110 sponsored by BRIAN STRAND - November 7, 2017 - RANKED 5TH

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Date: 11/11/2017 9:20:00 PM
Blessings and congratulations on your win, Line - nicely done! This is just gorgeous, and reminds me of the wonderful mornings following ice storms here in Maine ... it really is quite beautiful, as is this poem! :-)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/11/2017 9:58:00 PM
Thank you, Gregory. I really appreciate your sharing your reminiscing... have an awesome weekend!
Date: 11/11/2017 10:13:00 AM
I love poems that encourage us to live in the moment na you have done this so well. Congratulations! Kathy
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/11/2017 11:03:00 AM
Thank you, Kathleen. I appreciate your visit and your taking the time to leave me a lovely message.
Date: 11/9/2017 4:49:00 PM
Great imagery Line, congrats :)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 11/9/2017 7:30:00 PM
Thanks, Gary, appreciate your visit.
Date: 11/9/2017 4:49:00 PM
Wow! This is beautiful, Line. Congrats on your well-deserved win. Janice
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Date: 11/9/2017 7:31:00 PM
Thank you so much, Janice. Very sweet. Appreciate your visit and especially your taking the time to leave a note.

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