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"MARRY ME" -- The Sweethearts Valentine Candy I write with passion in every line, A poet bleeding words, in black and white Elegant, like a fine glass of red wine. I SIT! I LAY! I LOOK INTO YOUR KNIGHTLY EYES! Pearly paper I unwrap the magazine I switch the lights to read Gently I kiss you on the cheek Tonight my diary reads, LOVE I walked away, bathing for the night A beautiful purple Amethyst diary on the nightstand. The unthinkable; -O' you opened to read Page 1 - 50 dramatic, and set You skipped on over to the day we met. Page 88 Once I was lost in the twilight Then I magically found a box of invisible light There you stood like a diamond ring; Suddenly my heart began to sing Your love was more than the beauty that spawned from your soul Fair and cold like winter blues January stars following my every move I treasure every moment we spend like my mother’s cameo I lifted our memories and time framed them like yesterday A vintage picture, no one can erase or take away. Page 55 You skipped back and, opened a page that spoke about my broken dreams. Page 66 Smeared cobalt words in every line (CRYING) Page 77 Sapphire Glamour of fancy words Phrased that I finally found my amulet He will protect me with unspeakable powers. Page 99 Moonstone & Opal = 4ever My white shiny Pearl, listen to me whatever SLAMMING the diary shut!! A piece of paper fell, and you bent over to pick it up. Your heart skips ---- (when you read your name) Dear Diary! The roads ahead are full of bumps and screams. I will continue to open every door until I find my dreams. My sweetest love, soon will come, May he never dares to change me like the seasons. My sweetest love, soon will come Together well enjoy life and respect its reasons. A sexy man!! Will come and intrude the glossary of my life! My sweetest love, soon will come One day to make me his wife Today I will write and smile about love Page 111 I have no shame in asking the man who stops By to sneak a peek and read my diary once a week Will You MARRY ME????

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/30/2014 1:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely poem Linda.
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Date: 9/29/2014 6:42:00 AM
Hi Linda. Congratulations for your winning piece! As always, you rock with your creativity! ^_^ <3 One Love, Teddy.
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Date: 9/28/2014 7:03:00 AM
- Linda, congrats with your winning poem - A superb 2nd place !!! - Enjoying reading your poem - Have a lovely Sunday - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2014 5:56:00 AM
This is a nicely penned poem, congrats on the win,
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Date: 9/27/2014 11:21:00 AM
Thank you for entering my contest!
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Date: 9/27/2014 10:56:00 AM
Great idea n a superb write Linda! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 9/27/2014 9:31:00 AM
Congratulations Linda on your fine win.
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Date: 9/27/2014 8:33:00 AM
love the diary idea Linda unique write - congrats on your fine win:-) hugs jan xxx
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Date: 9/27/2014 7:36:00 AM
I'm coming I'm coming! I'll bring the ring with me of course....This should have placed #1 in my not very humble opinion...
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Date: 9/7/2014 1:43:00 AM
You have too much courage to wait for questions Linda. Your heart is romantically impatient, your hopes as strong as diamonds. " Together we'll enjoy life and all it's reasons..." that's warrior love. I'm also charmed by, " Today I will smile and wtite about love" I like your diary. J.A.B.
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Date: 5/12/2013 10:21:00 AM
Reading this marvelous write of yours ones again my dearest sis makes me feel great tonight (& of course including your new posted stellar poems) will send me to bed with both great & wonderful feeling most especially, seeing this one also in the winners list. MY BIGGEST HEARTY CONGRATULATIONS! Big big hugs! Thank you so much for everything! Good night & God bless you & your family! love always & 4evr, Leonora
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Date: 5/7/2013 8:28:00 PM
Congratulations my Sweet Dark Friend, don't you know it's the man that does the asking, though I would agree they need all the help they can get lol Take care, Richard
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Date: 5/7/2013 6:43:00 PM
One of he many things I enjoy about your writing is that it is enormously inventive, be it structure, as here, use of the language, mood... Congrats on the win. Much deserved... Jack
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Date: 5/7/2013 2:46:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Linda
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Date: 5/7/2013 9:56:00 AM
Congrats on your win to Lindaa :D wishing you a lovely day there :D hug, yanny
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Date: 5/7/2013 7:25:00 AM
Congrats on your deserving winning quill... Every lines was great. Thanks for the upliftment. You're who you are to me~A.O
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Date: 5/7/2013 5:28:00 AM
Congratulations, Linda!
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:22:00 PM
Hey Linda, I am so honored you entered my contest, great job and pleasant surprise to see your name come up. Half the excitement of judging is seeing who wins once the contest is posted.
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:22:00 PM
yeah meeee.... Thanks for the win.... Richard :-) xox~ Linda
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Date: 5/6/2013 8:14:00 PM
Stupendous Linda...congratulations....
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Date: 10/17/2012 8:07:00 PM
Wow! Huh!! This is so wonderful but a tremendous write my dearest friend PD. So glad to pick this one. What else can I comment to my greatest greatest poet? I've just read your comments on my inboxes and thank you so much for re reading my first poem, your support in my contest and others! About my friend and sister, Sallie? She's sweet also like me.LOL We still communicate but she has a family now. Her parents who adopted her also had considered me as their princess (like we're sisters) .hugs
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:46:00 PM
Priscilla was my cat only until I left Iowa for college,never to return. She turned into everybody's cat at the old family house. And lived with mom until she "croaked" about 15 years after I left home. My mom told me that story of how she died. Yes, my dang husband made me give up my wonderful OLLYVER dog. I cried and cried over that. I think Ollyver came to me in a dream when he died a few years later (he'd been adopted by someone at Pet smart. wish i knew who) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 1/28/2012 9:46:00 PM
now you gotta go take my quiz. But you might want to be careful about revealing names until you know what it all means!!
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Date: 1/18/2012 5:06:00 PM
how could anyone make this up? It's gotta be real! great story and well executed PD. Riveted my attention
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Date: 1/18/2012 6:24:00 AM
This is beautiful. As if you read a novel. So many stories inside. Great job, dear P.D. :)
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