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Jesus - a waltz wave

Christ Jesus turned water into wine. He gave sight to the blind and made the crippled whole. Jesus is working still today to bring light into the darkened soul.
6/7/21 For Brian Strand's All Yours contest (June 8) A Waltz Wave - 19 lines Syllable count 1,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,3,4,3,2,1,2,3,2,1,2,1

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Date: 6/16/2021 6:11:00 AM
Great testimony of your faith. I enjoyed reading this winner. Way go go. Congrats. Sara
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 3:36:00 PM
Thank you, Sara!
Date: 6/14/2021 10:05:00 PM
I can never think of bringing in such deep thought in a unique style.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/23/2021 3:35:00 PM
I have to work at it to get the words to work right and make sense. It takes practice. Thank you for commenting, Christuraj!
Date: 6/14/2021 12:12:00 AM
Thanks for this... the message that's Christ-exalting, and the form that's interesting, exemplifying what your contest requires. God bless you
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Beata!
Date: 6/13/2021 5:34:00 PM
Amen Kim. Beautifully done. God Bless, JB
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Judy!
Date: 6/13/2021 6:22:00 AM
WOW! Liked it very much.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Anisha!
Date: 6/11/2021 1:27:00 AM
Each word is elegance. So Spiritual and giving peace of Jesus to the reader.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:12:00 PM
Thank you, Christuraj!
Date: 6/10/2021 11:48:00 AM
I think we need Jesus more than ever now, sure been a trying few years.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:11:00 PM
I agree whole-heartedly, Paul! We need Jesus desparately! Thank you for commenting.
Date: 6/9/2021 7:12:00 PM
it works so great for looking like a cross too!! I think it can fill triple duty for contests as well!!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:09:00 PM
I didn't notice the cross. Thank you for pointing it out, Andrea!
Date: 6/9/2021 7:12:00 PM
Were you the judge sponsoring waltz wave? I need to look that up!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:08:00 PM
Yes, I am the judge.
Date: 6/9/2021 12:58:00 PM
Kim, wonderful Walz Wave and a great example and congratulations on your win, love _Constance
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Constance!
Date: 6/9/2021 12:20:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in Brain's contest. A difficult form, not easy to write something meaningful with such complex syllables count, but you make it seem so simple.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:08:00 PM
Thank you, Rama!
Date: 6/9/2021 12:08:00 PM
so beautiful & uplifting
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/14/2021 2:07:00 PM
Thank you, Jack!
Date: 6/8/2021 9:20:00 PM
I love the creative wave poetry form…and the subject of Jesus, of course! Wonderful poem, Kim! :)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:25:00 AM
Thank you, Laura!
Date: 6/8/2021 4:49:00 PM
Hi Kim, Amen! Jesus is still at work because he lives! Congratulations on your win; it was well deserved. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:24:00 AM
Thank you, Alexis!
Date: 6/8/2021 4:43:00 PM
Liked the rhymed binding of "crippled whole" and "soul". Isn't it what Christ Jesus was all about? Respecting your faith journey, congratulations on your placement. There is no piety in celebrating a poem of faith.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:24:00 AM
Thank you, Greg!
Date: 6/8/2021 4:08:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the Brian contest. You deserve with a very well-penned poem. Best regards
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Lasaad!
Date: 6/8/2021 10:57:00 AM
His spirit lifes on in us all Kim, we only have to open our hearts. Tom
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:23:00 AM
So true! Thank you, Tom!
Date: 6/8/2021 2:42:00 AM
Wonderful. Love this. God bless you always, Love, Gina
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:23:00 AM
Thank you, Gina!
Date: 6/7/2021 11:38:00 PM
Love this one, Kim, great work:)
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:22:00 AM
Thank you, Jo!
Date: 6/7/2021 11:35:00 PM
We would be long gone without Him.
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:22:00 AM
You are so right, Victor! Thank you for your comment!
Date: 6/7/2021 7:45:00 PM
Beautiful words!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:22:00 AM
Thank you, Unseeking Seeker~
Date: 6/7/2021 6:29:00 PM
Yes, HE is!
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:21:00 AM
Thank you for your comment, Kim!
Date: 6/7/2021 4:33:00 PM
Lovely, Kim ~
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Kim Merryman
Date: 6/9/2021 11:21:00 AM
Thank you, Line!