Jerusalem - In Collaboration With Dalia Shahein From Jordan

JERUSALEM 
Collaboration with Dalia Shahein (Jordan)

I, First
My Salem, my shalom, maybe yours as well -
Be well; build a well again – we’ll all be well, or
Better than before in Jerusalem of the heart
Whose Jerusalem made Jesus weep?
“O Jerusalem, Jerusalem, You who kill the Prophets …”
Forgive me, Redirect me, as your beloved exiles sang
Even in despair as long as millennia, you call your own!
Salem of mystery, of history, of prophecy!
Jesus had wanted to gather her under His tallit, Robe
Of Righteousness – by our Rabbi of Righteousness.
 Jesus showed his royal face and mystery-lineage once
To Abraham, revered Patriarch, respected Father:
As the High-Priest without beginning or end,
Melchizadek, King of Salem & Righteousness!
Who took the first tithe from our father-in-common
And delivered bread and wine: the first Communion
O Jerusalem of Jesus, How Long – how much longer?
I adore Thee like no earthly City
Come Jerusalem, Mother, Father, Heaven, Earth
All tongues sing of Thee, O Jerusalem, Come

II, Second
Jerusalem land of faith, land of all religions on earth
Jerusalem oh beloved Jerusalem, land of martyrs and saintly blood 
Jerusalem where Prophet Muhammad rose to the seventh sky 
You're the heaven that's on earth 
You're the meaning of purity and clarity,
The meaning of beauty and love, Jerusalem –
Land of GOD and all prophets 
We seek you, we pray … to be in the hands of GOD 
In you we seek to illuminate the darkness from our hearts 
In you we seek freedom from our sins 
Jerusalem oh beloved Jerusalem
We will die without you; we will fight to love you like others
You belong to God’s children; all of God – yes, ALL of GOD

III, Third
My Jerusalem, Thy Jerusalem, City of Past
And forever; replete with Prophecy – Speak!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/24/2017 2:04:00 PM
Good Afternoon Anil. I'm sorry it took so long to see this and to turn to your page. To say that the both of you have captured the essence and spirit would be insignificant. Be very proud as I am certain God is. There is such truth not to mention great depth and understanding. All me to let your words by the two of you stand. Marvelous in its entirety.
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Date: 4/24/2017 5:33:00 PM
Thanks awfully, Lisa. You are always so gracious and no exception here. Like most folks here, we wish to write truthfully, but also to make some tiny contribution towards a "better" world. Jesus loved people who hated Him; he wept for His own Jewish siblings who even kept trying to kill Him. Standing for the RIGHT thing is hard to do, but we have the Bible that says Forgive "enemies," not friends only. Shalom, shalom PS's popular angel.AD
Date: 4/22/2017 10:06:00 PM
Darren, Doug, Demetrios, Anne-Marie, Miraj --- Love of God tells me I could apologize that I haven't thanked you for your generous visits. I am grateful ... but had prayer workshops/seminars to conduct at church today ... in the anointing of the Spirit, I bless you richly. May U know truth & joys untold. amen
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Date: 4/22/2017 3:08:00 AM
What a beautiful song and collaboration, truly magnificent.
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Date: 4/21/2017 1:56:00 PM
I can hear the many voices. : )
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Date: 4/21/2017 7:28:00 AM
A divine hymn for Jerusalem sang melodiously by two devoted hearts to the divine! Marvelously done! Congratulations to both and a 7 to each dear, Anil!
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Date: 4/21/2017 7:02:00 AM
My goodness, Anil and Dalia, I have never seen before anybody write such a beautiful love song to a city, but you certainly did it and you sweep us along with you under your sails hoisted high. A 7:) Amitiés
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Date: 4/21/2017 6:47:00 AM
The land of the prophets have seen many ups and downs. A very lovely tribute and some genuine sentiments.Well done both of you.
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