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She went to the beach on a whim She jumped in the water to swim Her belly,... it wiggled ! Her bottom,... it jiggled ! The jellyfish thought she was kin !! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Limerick Contest Sponsored by Jan Allison 4/25/15

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Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/3/2015 3:03:00 PM

So funny, Carrie! Congrats on your win!

John Freeman

Date: 5/1/2015 9:37:00 PM

Boy, Carrie this one is a gem, wittier than anything I've seen in a while. Smile, Agape, Moses

Casarah Nance

Date: 4/30/2015 5:29:00 PM

Hahaha great!!!!

Mark Ackerson

Date: 4/30/2015 12:32:00 PM

This is a hoot! This should be right where it is Carrie, at the top.

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/30/2015 10:39:00 AM

Torrents of applause to you Carrie!!! ^_^

Judy Konos

Date: 4/30/2015 9:08:00 AM

Congratulations!

Rajat Kanti Chakrabarty

Date: 4/30/2015 6:37:00 AM

Jelly Belly Gelly whack!!! Love Carrie.C'Grats.-R

Nandita Das

Date: 4/29/2015 11:36:00 PM

Congratulations. As I said earlier this was the one that made me laugh the most.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/29/2015 10:58:00 PM

just knew she would adore this one. It's really the best!! congrats.

John Lawless

Date: 4/29/2015 10:36:00 PM

Congrats on the top spot Carrie. A very sub-cutaneous take on the theme

Kp Nunez

Date: 4/29/2015 7:21:00 PM

hahaha a cutie wiggly of a limy! Congrats Carrie! KIM :)

Eve Roper

Date: 4/29/2015 6:55:00 PM

Hahaha.... Funny! Congratulations on your wonderful win a 7:~)

David Mohn

Date: 4/29/2015 6:34:00 PM

This is great Carrie...big congrats

Tim Smith

Date: 4/29/2015 5:32:00 PM

Stopping back to give congratulations

Skat A

Date: 4/29/2015 5:26:00 PM

CARRIE, Congratulations...... SKAT LOVE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/29/2015 4:52:00 PM

Carrie, Congratulations on your awesome Limerick Win.... LINDA

Sandra Haight

Date: 4/29/2015 3:59:00 PM

Ha Ha! Too funny, Carrie! Missed reading it before, but it's definitely First Place quality! Love it! Congrats! Sandra

Robert Stoner Jr

Date: 4/29/2015 3:48:00 PM

lol very clever limerick Carrie, well done

Jan Allison

Date: 4/29/2015 3:46:00 PM

Many congrats on your top spot Carrie - both my hubby and I loved this:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 4/29/2015 10:46:00 AM

Ok, this made me wiggle, umm, jiggle--- oh I meant giggle with laughter, Carrie! I was expecting jelly beans when I read your title but found myself snickering with this one (jelly belly, snickers, my I am on sweets mode, it seems). Just dropping by a quick hi, Carrie! I hope to catch up with you soon! Very wiggly, oh I mean witty, limerick-- see, now I am getting all candy corny. I better stop. This is me, Nikko, in case you are wondering who this silly commenter is, haha.

Jack Ellison

Date: 4/28/2015 2:45:00 PM

You've got a good shot at it dear Carrie... CUTE!!! Hugs, Jack xxx

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/26/2015 8:26:00 PM

Dear Carrie, a friend and I are now laughing hysterically. Thank you! Definitely a winner, probably a first place. It doesn't get any funnier than this. Love, carolyn

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/26/2015 8:27:00 PM

Sorry the comment repeated. Soup is slow on my end today. Maybe it's the thunderstorms.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/26/2015 8:25:00 PM

Dear Carrie, a friend and I are now laughing hysterically. Thank you! Definitely a winner, probably a first place. It doesn't get any funnier than this. Love, carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/26/2015 6:49:00 PM

So awesome. I see it as a clear winner!!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/26/2015 5:09:00 PM

clever one lol, enoyed -p.d.