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Jays wheel by in tandem , a sky parade roller coasting above verdant grassland. As harbingers of enchanted autumn birdnotes usher crisp morning-- red plumes flung! Tetractys This Poetry Contest For charles messina 4/28/2019

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Date: 5/7/2019 4:10:00 PM
Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve
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Date: 5/4/2019 2:39:00 PM
Yours deserves to be in top placements, Nette. I loved it before and I love it now. Congrats.
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Date: 5/4/2019 9:25:00 AM
WoW! Nette, When I visit you I know I will read something amazing! I can just picture the birds flying in the majestic sky. Congratulations on a well deserved win. PS, I really appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/4/2019 8:18:00 AM
- Congratulations, Nette :)
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Date: 5/4/2019 8:05:00 AM
Lovely write Nette..Congrats on your win..
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Date: 5/4/2019 7:45:00 AM
Beautiful autumn write, Nette. Congratulations on your win. Hugs // Charlie :)
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Date: 5/1/2019 10:08:00 PM
The birds ARE the harbingers of the seasons...Precious penning, nette. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 4/29/2019 2:01:00 PM
As always, great imagery..
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Date: 4/29/2019 8:29:00 AM
Great entry, Nette! Janice
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Date: 4/28/2019 4:21:00 PM
Gorgeous, Nette!!
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Date: 4/28/2019 4:05:00 PM
I love how you use the language. Make the reader believe and see your words. A amazing poem.
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Date: 4/28/2019 5:32:00 AM
Nothing but beauty lives here in the paradise of Nette and birds, I love it. Hope your day is as wonderful as you are. xo
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Date: 4/27/2019 5:40:00 PM
Great way to express The changing of seasons. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 4/27/2019 3:58:00 PM
Very pretty! Lovely imagery, Nette!
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Date: 4/27/2019 2:32:00 PM
Lovely. I can feel the early morning. 'a sky parade roller coasting ' Awesome lines
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Date: 4/27/2019 1:43:00 PM
Love this one nette, a sky parade. Good luck. Tom. P.S. Soup mail.
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Date: 4/27/2019 12:30:00 PM
- A wonderful welcome to autumn, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/27/2019 12:00:00 PM
You made me hear the birds and their wings.
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