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Jays Welcome Autumn--Tet

Jays
wheel by
in tandem ,
a sky parade
roller coasting above verdant grassland. 

As harbingers of enchanted autumn
birdnotes usher
crisp morning--
red plumes
flung!



Tetractys This Poetry Contest
For charles messina   4/28/2019

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Eve Roper Date: 5/7/2019 4:10:00 PM Congratulations on your Tetractys form win. Hugs eve Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 5/4/2019 2:39:00 PM Yours deserves to be in top placements, Nette. I loved it before and I love it now. Congrats. Login to Reply

Alexis Y. Date: 5/4/2019 9:25:00 AM WoW! Nette, When I visit you I know I will read something amazing! I can just picture the birds flying in the majestic sky. Congratulations on a well deserved win. PS, I really appreciate your continued support:-) Alexis Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/4/2019 8:18:00 AM - Congratulations, Nette :) Login to Reply

Joseph May Date: 5/4/2019 8:05:00 AM Lovely write Nette..Congrats on your win.. Login to Reply

Charles Messina Date: 5/4/2019 7:45:00 AM Beautiful autumn write, Nette. Congratulations on your win. Hugs // Charlie :) Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/1/2019 10:08:00 PM The birds ARE the harbingers of the seasons...Precious penning, nette. G.L. in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon Login to Reply

Silent One Date: 4/29/2019 2:01:00 PM As always, great imagery.. Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 4/29/2019 8:29:00 AM Great entry, Nette! Janice Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 4/28/2019 4:21:00 PM Gorgeous, Nette!! Login to Reply

John Castellenas Date: 4/28/2019 4:05:00 PM I love how you use the language. Make the reader believe and see your words. A amazing poem. Login to Reply

Mystic Rose Rose Date: 4/28/2019 5:32:00 AM Nothing but beauty lives here in the paradise of Nette and birds, I love it. Hope your day is as wonderful as you are. xo Login to Reply

Richard Lamoureux Date: 4/27/2019 5:40:00 PM Great way to express The changing of seasons. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 4/27/2019 3:58:00 PM Very pretty! Lovely imagery, Nette! Login to Reply

Allen Beilschmidt Sr. Date: 4/27/2019 2:32:00 PM Lovely. I can feel the early morning. 'a sky parade roller coasting ' Awesome lines Login to Reply

Tom Cunningham Date: 4/27/2019 1:43:00 PM Love this one nette, a sky parade. Good luck. Tom. P.S. Soup mail. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/27/2019 12:30:00 PM - A wonderful welcome to autumn, Nette :) - Best wishes in the contest - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Sunlite Wanter Date: 4/27/2019 12:00:00 PM You made me hear the birds and their wings. Login to Reply