Jan's Halloween Dream

Jan's spouse said she's gilding the lilies
For treating herself to new frillies
All the neighbours got hot
When they saw what she bought
And that really gave Jan the willies!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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De Beaulieu Avatar
November 12, 2018 at 1:10 PM
Hello Rico, I like this poem you have done.Have a nice day my friend.
Dietrich Avatar
October 16, 2018 at 5:12 PM
So now I have seen all three of the recent Jan limericks. I like all three equally.
Laurie Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 6:26 PM
They gave Jan their willies! My Godfather; what goes on, on that island - thanks Rico - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 12:37 PM
Your tributes to Jan are soooo funny!
Leffanta Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:58 PM
Mahalo, Kim. Poetry Soup revels in sadness so having Jan's humour on board is indeed a blessing! Aloha! Rico
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 1:58 AM
ha ha ha very funny Rico:-) hugs Jan xx
Leffanta Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Mind those willies and stay safe! Aloha! Rico
Roper Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 11:07 PM
hahaha... is that about our Jan?
Leffanta Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 11:04 AM
Our Jan would just blow those willies away, wouldn't she? Aloha! Rico
Canerdy Avatar
October 14, 2018 at 9:24 PM
Good one, Rico! Janice
Leffanta Avatar
October 15, 2018 at 4:56 PM
Mahalo nui loa! Aloha! Rico
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