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Jamaica - Pleiades


Join me in paradise
jostled loose from my dreams.
Journey to barefoot sands.
Jewels of turquoise gleam,
jaunting free in warm waves. 
Jacaranda-kissed breeze  
jogs memories of love.  


Written 3/6/17 for J Pleiades Contest 
   

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 3/9/2017 8:27:00 AM
By the way a very challenging contest that you aced!
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Date: 3/9/2017 8:26:00 AM
Not surprised this did so well. Another great poem.
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:20:00 PM
I have never been to Jamaica, but you poem evokes a beautiful island atmosphere. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 3/8/2017 2:16:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win, Rhonda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 11:13:00 PM
That is so very beautiful, really good write. Congratulations :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:34:00 PM
Beautiful..Congrats on your win Rhonda
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:26:00 PM
Lovely, especially Jacaranda-kissed! Unique!
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Date: 3/7/2017 8:26:00 PM
Beautifully done Rhonda!! Congratulations! Well done sweetie! Big Hugggs deb
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Date: 3/7/2017 7:45:00 PM
Beautiful, congratulations on your win ! Hugs Eve
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Date: 3/7/2017 5:52:00 PM
You made me want to go there, Rhonda! I love the tropics and am love with Jacaranda trees! Congrats on your win :)
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Date: 3/7/2017 4:55:00 PM
Rhonda, I can close my eyes and picture the scene! Beautiful, vivid imagery! Congrats on your 2nd place win! Blessings, Kim
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Date: 3/6/2017 6:46:00 AM
A lovely Pleiades, Rhonda, and a beautiful picture of a jacaranda tree in bloom. Best wishes for the contest. T.J
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Date: 3/5/2017 10:24:00 PM
I believe for imagery alone this is one of the very best on soup. For sure you will place high!!
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Date: 3/5/2017 10:24:00 PM
wish I could see more of your poems but I am way behind and have to get off now!!
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:20:00 PM
Beautiful, my dear...simply beautiful. We have beautiful jacaranda trees on our university campus here. I can't tell you how they make my heart sing.
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Date: 3/5/2017 9:12:00 PM
This is beautiful and cute Rhonda... Great imagery... Loved it... Good luck in the contest...
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Date: 3/5/2017 4:06:00 PM
and what a love it must have been, there is a sense of freedom in this poem..good luck you should do well
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Date: 3/5/2017 1:19:00 PM
Just give me the date and time and I'll join you, Rhonda! Your description of "paradise" is sooo beautiful. Wishing you success in the contest!
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 3/5/2017 9:10:00 PM
Could you imagine a Poetry Soup Caribbean cruise to Jamaica? Now, that would be fun!
Date: 3/5/2017 11:35:00 AM
Stunnng piece!
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Date: 3/5/2017 10:59:00 AM
A warm, inviting write Rhonda...Nicely done
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Date: 3/5/2017 10:40:00 AM
ohhh, so lovely; i like the total mood of your poetry, rhonda.. huggs
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Date: 3/5/2017 3:57:00 AM
- A beautiful pleiades, Rhonda - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/5/2017 3:37:00 AM
Absolutely beautiful imagery and image Rhonda - it sure looks like paradise to me!:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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