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Jailhouse Blues

He said it was the booze That caused him to abuse And leave her with a bruise. The judge said, " I don't excuse. I simply must refuse Your efforts to diffuse. Your answers don't amuse. It's just your lawyer's ruse. You have too short a fuse And I've had time to peruse The reasons that she sues. My answer is ..You lose! Take the laces from his shoes And lock him up in the calaboose." For Carolyn's monorhyme contest Won 2nd place

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Date: 5/29/2010 6:40:00 AM
Marvellous Joyce, ooo i bet so many have been in this position. Congratulations on your win in Carolyn's contest >> James
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Date: 5/28/2010 4:26:00 PM
Joyce, this is quite an amusing take on the contest. Very worthy presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 5/28/2010 10:08:00 AM
Not only a clever motor rhyme...but a great message. Congratulations, Joyce on your win! Love, Carrie
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Date: 5/28/2010 9:26:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on your winning 2nd place in the Monorhyme contest with this awesome and wonderful write ..enjoy your worthy win and have a great holiday weekend..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/28/2010 8:40:00 AM
This poem rocks, Joyce! Loved the use of humor and perfect rhyme. I had to look up calaboose to find it means "jail." Excellent work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/27/2010 2:59:00 PM
this one is GREAT, and you better win something for it! Luv, andrea
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Date: 5/26/2010 4:21:00 PM
Awesome mono- Great job, and I really like the ending to it all!
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