Jagged - First Place Contest Winner
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In a striking and jagged world, my heart cracked.
But I will not be beaten; I will not be subdued.
As I wandered, Earth's boundaries attacked.
I have vigor and a spirit that is renewed.
Mark the scheme's progression with scars.
Each nightmare makes you stretch spars.
And scream upon weeping rose to the stars.
Remnants of a world once whole, now debris
Space junk drifts to pierce my roof and set me free.
Chemicals and detritus are just tough to foresee.
On the way to jagged peaks, many have struggled.
It's twisted and rusted, with a grief portent imbued.
Thus, brace ourselves for lengthy star wars
Jagged shards of cosmic space float aimlessly.
1 st place contest winner
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