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Jacket

I stir the air. Suddenly; Senses alert. You. I smell you, Like almost stale laundry, In cool burst of air on my skin. I close my eyes. I touch the worn threads, I feel the red, Burying my face in it. Engulf me. Just one more breath, You're fading, Flickering in and out of existence, Your scent is a memory now. I cling to you fervently, I didn't say you could leave! I open my eyes to scold you. It's just your jacket.

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Date: 1/7/2009 6:06:00 AM
Lol..I love the last stanza..didn't expect that..wonderfullly done and it read beautifully..Thanks for sharing your work.
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