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Imagine, Interlude, Ivory Contest       October 13, 2023

           Sponsored by Constance La France

            Painting by Katharine Buchanan

Ivory

"An ivory tower can be a fine place to live 
as long as you don't lock yourself in, and others out."
                                                           ~ by poet

Graceful, Leanore is such a beautiful child, 
Long wavy blonde hair and ivory skin 
like alabaster or porcelain, crystal blue eyes
Pure and innocent of all but original sin

She'd be an angel with white feathered wings
If she were not the progeny of my line
She dances and twirls as if floating on a cloud
An imp one moment, in the next she's divine

We've tea together, with scones, of course
Pretends she lives high up in a castle tower
I asked if it was made of ivory and got the look
The sullen wrinkled brow that I call her glower

"It's okay, my darling Leanore, one day soon...
much too soon, you will come to understand
that not everyone is lucky to live in a castle
At four, she smiled at me and took my hand

Enthralled, she watches bees collecting honey
A Fairy Tale Princess waving her wand in the air
saying, "I'll turn this green lizard into a prince."
Her laughter is entrancing, her ivory skin so fair

In sleep, this precious child dreams with a smile
on her rosebud lips. Wish she'd stay as she is now
if it were in my power to keep her in that tower
But that's a selfish wish that love will not allow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Andresen Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 9:58 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Lin :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 11:28 AM
Many thanks, Anne-Lise. Hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 3:45 AM
Back with congratulations on POTD! …and congratulations on your contest win!
Lane Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Thanks so much, Kim.
La France Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 10:45 AM
Lin, you have penned a beautiful poem and congratulations on your win in my contest, I love the image and quote, and congratulations on your POTD also, Constance
Lane Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 5:44 AM
Thanks for each of your wonderful comments, Constance as well as for the honored placement in your contest.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 18, 2023 at 9:14 AM
Back with Congratulations on another win on this beautiful/wonderful ~ story/write. I loved reading it again. Have a blessed/great day writing away.................
Lane Avatar
October 19, 2023 at 5:42 AM
Thank you for returning, Paula. Enjoy your day.
M  Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:17 AM
What a truly lovely poem Lin about the joy children bring to our lives…puts things in perspective! A wonderful relationship depicted here also between adult and child. Congratulations on POTD my friend! Debx
Lane Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 7:34 PM
Thank you my sweet friend. See you in the Creek.
Bangalee Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 9:42 PM
yeah right this is delightful poem; I enjoyed truly; nice to read; congrats for being selected the poem as POD
Lane Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:30 AM
Thank you for enjoying this one, Mahtab.
Alhemaidy Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Congratulations on a deserved poem of the day! Have a great day ~AA
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:21 PM
Thank you very much for the great comments, AA
Toney Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 4:25 PM
What a delight, Lin. Congratulations on Poem of the Day!
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:15 PM
Hi, Mark and thanks ever so much.
Poet Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 3:14 PM
Lin, congrats on being selected as the Poem of the Day. Your work is engaging as it has an ethereal feel, and I sense an intense yearning within its lyrics. You have incredible writing skills, and I admire you so much for it.
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:14 PM
Thank you very much for your gracious comments, Lasaad. I'm humbled.
Y. Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 3:12 PM
Wow! Lin, Nice quote and photo. I found your well-written write to be enchanting and well-written. Is this about your granddaughter? Congratulations on getting the poem of the day. It was well deserved. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:14 PM
Hi Alexis and thanks so much for your sweet remarks. This is not about my granddaughter, but could very well be since she's an angel.
May Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 10:17 AM
A wonderful write with an enchanting touch Lin, Congrats on POTD
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 2:55 PM
Hi Joseph and thanks for finding it to your liking.
Goldsmith Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:26 AM
Congratulations on your POTD win. A beautiful/wonderful story/write/quote. "Love It" Oh!!! to be 4 again. Yes, she must grow up to be a Princess. Have a blessed day with your win. Enjoy It..................
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 12:41 PM
Thank you very much, Paula.
Gentile Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:09 AM
Lin, congratulations n your POTD honors ! Your poem is enchanting and I read a certain longing in-between the lines that really draws me in! Your are such a fine writer!! Enjoy your day xxoo
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Reading such a comment from poets of your talent is always encouraging to me, Mike. Many thanks to you for supporting so many of my poems. Xxoo. Have a happy Sunday.
Baker Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:51 AM
Lovely heartful story of a precious one you love, Lin. Beautiful rhyming and a joyful read. Congratulations on your POTD, my friend! Enjoy your special day of recognition. A poet friend in Texas, Bill
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:58 AM
Thanks cowboy. Lol. You’re a fine next door neighbor. I always enjoy your comments and every day I wake. Hugs
Fowler Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:29 AM
What a sweet poem. Children are so innocent and imaginative. Congratulations on POTD dear Lin! :)
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:55 AM
Yes, they are, Linda and it’s beautiful. Thank you.
Scott Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:34 AM
Lin, this is a lovely POTD, and you are right.. an ivory tower is no place for a princess, the world is scary but cotton wool a rounded human does not make. I liked "a selfish wish that love will not allow" as love, when it is true, knows best :) Well done on POTD.. enjoy :))
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 7:54 AM
Children cannot be cocooned in spun silk, even though we’d like to keep them swaddled longer. Thank you, Sam.
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:34 AM
woohooooo Many congrats on POTD Lin I am delighted for you, so glad to see real poetry getting POTD, i guess mine just slipped through the filter yesterday lol. Perhaps the sherrif can track down about my missing comments I think that pesky soup gremlin is at work. hugs jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 6:23 AM
I recall posting this a few years ago.. Ignoring ignorance annoys the ignorant. That holds true more so in these times.
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:42 AM
I agree Lin but as you know its been hurled at me all too often recently.
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:38 AM
I read your comment and replied to it yesterday, Jan.lol There are always soup gremlins hovering but sooner or later they go away. Thank you for a second set of compliments. That term, real poetry,’ has no place on a poetry site where only encouraging comments are to be given… so says PS administration. Hugs.
Koplin Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Absolutely beautiful Lin!! Your talent is showcased well today, pretty good ink for such a mean girl. Lol Congratulations on your POTD!!!
Koplin Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 8:18 AM
Right! Lol
Allison Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:35 AM
I got POTD yesterday Mark, perhaps admin can see those who are really mean!
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:30 AM
Good morning, Sheriff. I’m enjoying being called a mean girl. Flip that one over a few times and it will still be served with peanuts. Honey roasted. Thanks for the congrats and see ya in the Creek. Come over for free coffee any time.
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October 15, 2023 at 3:37 AM
Such magical moments are all too rare and fleeting Lin, but your poem captures the essence of them much better than any video or camera ever could, congratulations on a beautiful POTD, one you should always treasure, cheers David
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:07 AM
A camera can only capture a moment but a poem written from the love in a poet’s heart will never fade. Many thanks for your compliments and friendship, David.
Seeker Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 3:35 AM
In a way, we may say, we too are as is Leanore, scripting dreams within dreams. A superb piece of poetry, Lin, warmest congratulations on POTD
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:04 AM
Thanks very much, Seeker. We should hold onto dreams fior as long as we can, just as long as we can keep our children near us.
Jones Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 3:33 AM
Aw she sounds precious Lin. She will cherish the memories you make with her always. Congratulations on a charming potd.
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:02 AM
Thank you ever so much, Karen. I’m grate for your kind thoughts.
Kitchin Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 3:13 AM
Lin, such a sweet and charming poem, one that I hope you will share with your grand-daughter, wonderfully penned, congratulations on POTD! Hugs.
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 5:01 AM
I definitely will share this with Eloise and might use a picture of her. Great idea. Thanks, Tania. I wish Tom’s Milton Creek saga had been potd? though.
Andresen Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 2:51 AM
- Back with a congratulations on your p.o.t.d., Lin :) - Have a lovely Sunday :) - hugs
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 4:59 AM
Thank you very much, Anne-Lise. Have a grand day, too.
Messina Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 2:22 AM
This is one of those poems that you can read over and over again and still smile widely every time. Such a enjoyable write, Lin. Congratulations on POTD! Hugs Charlie
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 2:45 AM
Good morning, Charlie and I’m grateful you enjoyed it so much. Thank you most sincerely.
Bowring Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:39 AM
Many congratulations dear Lin on POTD with this beautiful, enchanting poem. Such a delight to read. My beautiful nieces are young women now but it made me yearn for them to be little princesses all over again. What fun we had! So well written and so much captured within its poetic lines. I love your amazing quote as well alongside the picture. ‘ Her laughter is entrancing, her ivory skin so fair’ ‘ In sleep, this precious child dreams with a smile’. Gorgeous!
Lane Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 2:42 AM
I totally understand your feelings, Christina. I feel the same way about my children and grandchildren. If only we could keep them little just a little longer. Thanks so much for your comments. Hugs and smiles for you, too.
Bowring Avatar
October 15, 2023 at 1:41 AM
Enjoy your well deserved congratulatory day. You deserve it. Hugs and smiles to you xx :):)
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