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I'Ve Watched Them Fall

the trees pierce of sight with raven's eyes beyond the iron gate the stones now seal their whispered fate as hush of gossip falls in silence on the hill their lips now pucker of death's last kiss stygian old maids their blood drops crimson against skies rejected even by night

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Brenda Chiri

Date: 9/6/2019 7:21:00 PM

Another stunner Sandy! Lovin your work they are beautiful! Your talent is rare!;)

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/6/2019 8:07:00 PM

Thank you, though as you will notice, many have sadness in them...just what my muse seems to pen often... :) hugs

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/4/2019 8:49:00 AM

Wow! Nicely done, imagery and all!

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/4/2019 9:50:00 AM

Thank you, just something i penned from an image of a cemetery... hugs :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/3/2019 11:21:00 AM

Dark and lonely, the fear is felt as night even rejects the approach. This was amazing, an eerie image is created in my mind as I read this. Fantastic my friend.

Sandra Adams
Date: 9/3/2019 11:33:00 AM

Thank you my friend, your constant support and kind words are deeply appreciated...my muse likes to pull the dark out in life for whatever reason....hugs