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It's Twilight Time In the City

Twilight Time in the City Hear the hum of the Honda and Hundai, It’s twilight time in the city. Yellow boxes empty streams of ants Into the twilight of the city. Day care Dads and maudlin Moms Kiss scrappy little lads and lasses; Asking their moppets “How were your classes?” It’s twilight time in the city. When skyscrapers twinkle their first night lights, An orange juice sun pours into purple night, Smells of smoke from outdoor grills Promising mouth-watering fare to fill. McDonald’s lines are long for McDinners, While some are on decks with flutes of wine, Drones of commuter planes overhead, a sign. It’s twilight time in the city.

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Date: 3/20/2018 5:44:00 PM
I tried to sing this to the Platters "Twilight Time." Isn't easy but it can be forced to fit!
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/20/2018 6:21:00 PM
I wasn't trying to write it that way, but thanks for trying and reading it!!!! I did love that song.
Date: 3/17/2018 9:29:00 AM
Superb imagery,flow and insight into the hustle and bustle that oft goes with city life my friend. "Yellow boxes empty streams of ants" "An orange juice sun pours into purple night," Exceptional verses all but these two struck me immediately. A fav....
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/17/2018 10:49:00 AM
You cannot know how much your comment means to me. Thank you.
Date: 3/13/2018 10:44:00 PM
I have a 1997 Honda I put a lot of money into it , its vintage i like it the poem
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/17/2018 10:47:00 AM
Thank you, Marc! Sorry I'm late.
Date: 3/13/2018 10:43:00 PM
You said you have a daughter, a comment you left on one of my poems I have one or two children poems , i hope you like them , i tried https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_elephant_and_the_snake_994565 ---------------------------------- https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/_there_is_a_tiger_chasing_me_994155
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Date: 3/13/2018 7:34:00 PM
My kind of poetry, Sunlite! So charmingly descriptive in each line. Many thx for your kind comments re Prospector Pete. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
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Date: 3/11/2018 6:33:00 PM
Very nice has a great! rhythm to it. Your poems are heart felt.
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Date: 3/10/2018 5:27:00 PM
That is a great image, guess this is what rush hour is like..
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/10/2018 6:44:00 PM
Pretty much, it is. Thank you!
Date: 3/10/2018 4:57:00 PM
Great verse Sunlite, you painted a good image here.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/10/2018 6:39:00 PM
My appreciation for your commenting.!
Date: 3/10/2018 3:50:00 PM
Delightful imagery of a special time of day. Well done, Sunlite.
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Sunlite Wanter
Date: 3/10/2018 6:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, Line.

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