It's Twilight Time In the City

Twilight Time in the City

Hear the hum of the Honda and Hundai,
It’s twilight time in the city.
Yellow boxes empty streams of ants
Into the twilight of the city.

Day care Dads and maudlin Moms
Kiss scrappy little lads and lasses;
Asking their moppets “How were your classes?”
It’s twilight time in the city.

When skyscrapers twinkle their first night lights,
An orange juice sun pours into purple night,
Smells of smoke from outdoor grills
Promising mouth-watering fare to fill.

McDonald’s lines are long for McDinners,
While some are  on decks with flutes of wine,
Drones of commuter planes overhead, a sign.
It’s twilight time in the city.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Salmonson Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 5:44 PM
I tried to sing this to the Platters "Twilight Time." Isn't easy but it can be forced to fit!
Wanter Avatar
March 20, 2018 at 6:21 PM
I wasn't trying to write it that way, but thanks for trying and reading it!!!! I did love that song.
Lindley Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 9:29 AM
Superb imagery,flow and insight into the hustle and bustle that oft goes with city life my friend. "Yellow boxes empty streams of ants" "An orange juice sun pours into purple night," Exceptional verses all but these two struck me immediately. A fav....
Wanter Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 10:49 AM
You cannot know how much your comment means to me. Thank you.
Acrich Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:44 PM
I have a 1997 Honda I put a lot of money into it , its vintage i like it the poem
Wanter Avatar
March 17, 2018 at 10:47 AM
Thank you, Marc! Sorry I'm late.
Acrich Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 10:43 PM
You said you have a daughter, a comment you left on one of my poems I have one or two children poems , i hope you like them , i tried https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/the_elephant_and_the_snake_994565 ---------------------------------- https://www.poetrysoup.com/poem/_there_is_a_tiger_chasing_me_994155
Hinshaw Avatar
March 13, 2018 at 7:34 PM
My kind of poetry, Sunlite! So charmingly descriptive in each line. Many thx for your kind comments re Prospector Pete. Best to you as you continue your poetical journey - Bob
Fick Avatar
March 11, 2018 at 6:33 PM
Very nice has a great! rhythm to it. Your poems are heart felt.
One Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 5:27 PM
That is a great image, guess this is what rush hour is like..
Wanter Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 6:44 PM
Pretty much, it is. Thank you!
Cunningham Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 4:57 PM
Great verse Sunlite, you painted a good image here.
Wanter Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 6:39 PM
My appreciation for your commenting.!
Gauthier Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 3:50 PM
Delightful imagery of a special time of day. Well done, Sunlite.
Wanter Avatar
March 10, 2018 at 6:43 PM
Thank you so much, Line.
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