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It's Too Late

If only I could find a way to understand The things you did The choices you made What you gave up to protect yourself I will never understand So my acceptance must be this That you could not love You could not keep your children safe Over time your wall of lies became so high I couldn’t see you anymore Somehow you’ve made yourself believe That everything was alright That everything is alright Passing blame like flame to survive Never stopping once to think What you could have had If only, I could show you, but it’s too late Heidi Sands 5/30/17

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Date: 5/31/2017 11:45:00 AM
I just want to give you a hug, so I do. HUG
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2017 12:30:00 PM
Thank you Darren. That is so kind and sweet :) I appreciate your comment.
Date: 5/30/2017 10:40:00 PM
Very well written yet intense poem Heidi you captured your feelings so well nicely done.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/31/2017 7:11:00 AM
Hi Edward. Thank you for the kind feedback.
Date: 5/30/2017 5:13:00 PM
A very sad feel Heidi...I hope all is well
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 5:15:00 PM
Hi Tim. A sad poem yes. All is ok, thanks :)
Date: 5/30/2017 3:50:00 PM
your words really tug at the heartstrings Heidi - very emotional write:-) hugs Jan xx
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Jan :)
Date: 5/30/2017 3:25:00 PM
I could feel the emotion. That's what poetry should be. :)
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Marie :)
Date: 5/30/2017 3:22:00 PM
I felt the hurt of how it feels when love slips away a little more, slowly, each day in this rain burst poem, Heidi. Let your honest words rain on us. Love this poem, it is very soul searchingly real. Excellent poem, dear. Love always.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 4:16:00 PM
Thank you very much Freddie. I appreciate your friendship :)
Date: 5/30/2017 3:15:00 PM
Heart-wrenching, but beautiful, Heidi--full of emotion! Janice
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 3:21:00 PM
Thank you for your comment , Janice :)
Date: 5/30/2017 2:59:00 PM
Wow, now this was sad my friend. This really tugs at the heart strings and tugs strongly. Really well written but oh so sad.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 5/30/2017 3:01:00 PM
I know, I sometimes do write sad ones, Chris. Thank you for your comment :)

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