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It's Dangerous To Dream

Behind a veil of darkness, twinkling lights confetti night. And yet, these constellations are an unfamiliar sight. I miss you the most at dusk when memories feel so real. And I'm eager to write you and share everything I feel. It's said, God walked desert sands, and His love lingers there still. But, just thinking about God feels weird; when sent here to kill. and His love lingers there still. But, just thinking about God feels weird; when sent here to kill. I got letters from strangers writing they were proud of me. And yet, despite all their praise, my conscience won't let me be. I wish I could talk to you instead of scribbling some lines. But, it's dangerous to dream, amongst the bullets and mines. Stationed in Afghanistan, it's unwise to let thoughts roam. And as a shooting star falls I make a wish; to go home. (Quatrain) 1/26/2015

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Date: 5/25/2018 8:37:00 PM
Awesome poem from the perspective of a soldier, Emile.
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Date: 1/28/2015 7:21:00 PM
You touched a tender spot in my heart for both the soldier and the love lorn... Excellent, my friend.. Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 1/28/2015 8:10:00 PM
Then my aim was on and I reached my target, thanks. Emile.
Date: 1/27/2015 7:49:00 PM
Keep the danger of dreaming on because it's a dull and dead end death to not
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Date: 1/27/2015 7:54:00 PM
Thanks, for your support. Emile.
Date: 1/27/2015 9:47:00 AM
how deep and heartfelt can this get, emile...may peace reign in our world.. lovely!.. huggs
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Date: 1/27/2015 10:28:00 AM
Thanks Nette, I appreciate your words of encouragement. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2015 7:07:00 PM
A fantastic write about war, soldier's duty and laments. War is pure hell and anybody that likes it is crazy. Yet those that are duty bound to engage in it must endure, serve and pray to survive it.. A super 7 on this fine poem.
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Date: 1/27/2015 9:14:00 AM
Thanks Robert, I appreciate your continued support. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2015 4:02:00 PM
Outstanding write my dear friend . . . battles are fought not only on the battle field but in the warrior's heart and in the hearts of those he battles for . . .7
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:03:00 PM
I appreciate all your wonderful words of praise. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2015 3:37:00 PM
Beautiful, moving, sad and no doubt, true. You have penned this quite well.
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Date: 1/26/2015 4:06:00 PM
Once more you have saw fit to praise my work, thank you again. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2015 2:31:00 PM
A wonderful piece Emile..I love perspective of the soldier in the far away land...A 7
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:55:00 PM
Thank you for you continued support Tim. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2015 2:30:00 PM
One more well written pen... enjoyed reading Emile... lov,nad!
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:56:00 PM
Nadiya, I can always count on you for a smile. Thanks. Emile.
Date: 1/26/2015 2:09:00 PM
Very powerful pen Emile! Nice imagery! I really enjoyed this poem and the content is deep and the rhyming sounds just flows my dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a lovely evening! :) Love and hugs! xxxx D. ^O^
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Date: 1/26/2015 2:57:00 PM
As always your praise flatters me, thanks. Emile.

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