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Fall is getting prompt for its chilly main part. Spread each leaf until the forest floor is strewn. Joined by bright leaves waving to the summer's past. Differing old layouts, and not a trice too soon! Spread each leaf until the forest floor is strewn. And the heron shriek out above the clear blue air Differing old layouts, and not a trice too soon! While the white clouds emerge to shout "beware!" And the heron shriek out above the clear blue air The swollen creek has no time to fade away. While the white clouds emerge to shout "beware!" The Fall charm waits for our parent's offer lay. The swollen creek has no time to fade away. A woodpecker beats on a tree searching food. The Fall charm waits for our parent's offer lay. Mixed together, they make for a timing, good.
A woodpecker beats on a tree searching food. A parade of old thoughts walks within new sense. Mixed together, they make for a timing, good. And nothing is lost when the mood is intense! A woodpecker beats on a tree searching food. A parade of old thoughts walks within new sense. Mixed together, they make for a timing, good. And nothing is lost when the mood is intense! A parade of old thoughts walks within new sense. My heart is racing as I latch on to beat. And nothing is lost when the mood is intense! The kernel of Autumn's singing is so sweet. My heart is racing as I latch on to beat. Joined by bright leaves waving to the summer's past. The kernel of Autumn's singing is so sweet. Fall is getting prompt for its chilly main part.
Written: September 02, 2022 Autumn Pantoum Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Caren Krutsinger

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Date: 11/8/2022 2:06:00 PM
… And the heron shriek out above the clear blue air… And nothing is lost when the mood is intense!… Congratulations!
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Date: 11/8/2022 10:30:00 AM
Congratulations Lasaad on your win. This is such a unique vision of autumn wrapped up in a musical metaphor - autumn moving on to the beat of its own drum making its own kind of music! Delightful! Blessings my friend!
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Date: 11/8/2022 6:46:00 AM
Back with big congratulations your win Lasaad!
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Date: 11/8/2022 5:09:00 AM
Marvelous work on autumn in pantoum form. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/8/2022 2:56:00 AM
Wonderful, the repeating lines blended in effortlessly; congratulations.
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Date: 11/8/2022 1:22:00 AM
Congratulations friend on your first place win !
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Date: 11/7/2022 1:42:00 PM
Very nice Pantoum, Lasaad. I thoroughly enjoyed it. I know Caren did, too.
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Date: 9/12/2022 6:46:00 AM
You captured the preparation for change admirably Lasaad. Nicely penned! Linda
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Date: 9/11/2022 8:12:00 AM
Your Pantoum is excellent, Lasaad, The beauty of your words exceed the beautiful picture of the yellow flowers shown above. Bes wishes for a high placement in the contest my dear friend. Bill
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Date: 9/5/2022 6:24:00 PM
Love this form of poetry, and even better with this wonderful poem, Where there is so much to ponder on..Thanks for posting, enjoyed the journey.
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Date: 9/3/2022 6:12:00 AM
Beautiful images my friend. Much enjoyed the spirit of Fall you convey in this hard to execute form.
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Date: 9/3/2022 5:45:00 AM
A masterful creation of Pantoum, my friend, Lasaad. Very impressive. Be blessed!
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Date: 9/3/2022 12:02:00 AM
Not the easiest of forms I've found but you've made it look easy Lasaad. I must say it is my favourite season out of the four. Travelling home today, been a great week. Tom
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Date: 9/3/2022 7:21:00 AM
Please accept my sincere gratitude, Tom. I am grateful for your kind comments, and I am pleased to learn that you had a wonderful time in Spain and that you will soon be returning home. I hope you had a safe journey back, and are you excited for a new adventure? I'm also in Los Angeles and will be flying back to my hometown today.
Date: 9/2/2022 11:58:00 PM
Pantoum itself is a tough poetic form . But with such ease you have written a beautiful one on Autumn.... that too with perfect rhyming. Vivid images of the season are neatly strung together ! All the best in the contest, dear Lasaad !
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Date: 9/2/2022 10:40:00 PM
Your imagery is impeccable. Pity I am not in a mood to write on autumn. My mood is stagnant.
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Date: 9/2/2022 6:30:00 PM
Your creative mind Lasaad brings forth this spectacular Poem to life. The Season Autumn you have captured vividly and the imagery is bought out in your selective words. A fine entry for the contest my friend. Best wishes to you and God bless you...
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