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Its a Risque Business

they closed the brothel to open a bakery tarts still lay around black forests are on display no fresh muffins ~ nothing’s changed They Closed The Brothel Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann 14/02/2021/ syllable counter PS 5/7/5/7/7

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Jenna Logan

Date: 3/5/2021 11:52:00 PM

Didn’t you just tell me you were having a writing dry spell? This poem certainly proves you are not. Well done, David.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/6/2021 12:16:00 AM

Heya Jenna, thanks for popping in, I’m museless at the moment, I have started so many poems, only to run into brick walls, I’ll come back with a ladder next week hopefully, glad you enjoyed this one, cheers David

Nancy Kaufman

Date: 3/5/2021 12:26:00 PM

that is really very very funny..loved it.

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/5/2021 12:46:00 PM

Heya Nancy thanks you so much for looking in, bit of light hearted double entendre, delighted you enjoyed cheers David

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/5/2021 10:09:00 AM

- :))) ... love the last line :))) ... unique and imaginative - Congratulations on your third place in the contest, David :) - // Anne-Lise :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/5/2021 10:56:00 AM

I was lucky to scrape in 3rd me thinks Anne Lise, but delighted to get a place, thank you so much for calling in with congratulations cheers David

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 3/5/2021 7:19:00 AM

LOLOLOL. Perfect - I'm still laughing. :)) A stroke of genius ;) Congratulations on the win David! Linda

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/5/2021 8:49:00 AM

What can I say Linda, it all started with the tarts and went downhill from there, believe me a couple of others came to mind, but I thought, best not go there, thanks for calling by with congratulations cheers David

Brian Sambourne

Date: 3/5/2021 6:41:00 AM

What a superb take on the brothel closing. Very imaginative indeed. A winner. Congratulations! Brian

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/5/2021 8:56:00 AM

Thanks Brian, I took a chance on the smutty side, best not tell my wife, she worked in a bakery some time ago, Hmm! anyway I’m delighted with the placement, cheers David

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 3/5/2021 4:50:00 AM

Brilliant! Congrats on your win, with this original take on the contest!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/5/2021 6:07:00 AM

Thanks seeker risqué indeed, had a good laugh writing some double entendre, I’m delighted to get a placement cheers David

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 3/5/2021 4:00:00 AM

clever and brilliant pun! well done! congrats on your win!

David Kavanagh
Date: 3/5/2021 6:09:00 AM

Thanks Krish was totally unexpected to get a placement, but delighted with the result cheers David

Gary Radice

Date: 2/15/2021 11:26:00 AM

I laughed out loud. Brilliant. :)

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 12:02:00 PM

I was laughing myself writing it Gary, wondering if the 2 Ronnie’s would’ve taken a chance on it, cheers David

Christopher Flaherty

Date: 2/15/2021 9:24:00 AM

Hahaha funy clever Enjoyed

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 10:51:00 AM

Took a chance on this one for the contest, I hope Kai sees the Funny side, cheers David

Jan Allison

Date: 2/14/2021 3:47:00 PM

ha ha ha this is hilarious David, good luck in the contest i dont think i will be writing for it:-) hugs jan xx

David Kavanagh
Date: 2/15/2021 4:05:00 AM

Oh come on Jan, I was looking forward to your take on this contest, only kidding, a serious one perhaps? glad you enjoyed cheers David