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It's a Long Road

Years he dreamt a dreamer’s dream To top the charts his visionary theme, Only now can the scullion understand Everyone fails in a star cross band. © Harry J Horsman 2021

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Beata Agustin

Date: 9/24/2021 1:59:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this, and the realization it creates. God bless you.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/23/2021 3:32:00 PM

Wonderful, Harry, and congrats in the contest.

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/23/2021 11:29:00 AM

Good one Harry! Only five percent of musicians have any success and many just expect to be stars without understanding a four letter word starting with "w" - work! Nor do they understand being flexible and creating many avenues for their craft. Congratulations and high fives! Sending you blessings!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/23/2021 9:53:00 AM

Beautiful and interesting Writing! Congratulations!

Judy Ball

Date: 9/21/2021 5:10:00 AM

Many dream f living the life of fame and fortune but very few attain it even fr a little while. Then there are those who get a glimpse of it but are just there for a moment and then gone and no one ever knows why. I prefer to live anonymously and be known only by God Himself. At least He wont tire of me and cast me away like a wad of used chewing gum. Great job here my friend. Hope it's a winner. God Bless, JB

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 9/14/2021 11:33:00 PM

Ha, and from a man who won a TV show with his voice, this is excellent. xx

Supraja Kannan

Date: 9/12/2021 10:06:00 PM

Brilliant!!! Loved these four lines...

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/11/2021 1:19:00 AM

No chance of walking a long way. Lovely poem.

Jan Allison

Date: 9/10/2021 9:19:00 AM

Excellent ink Harry, good luck in the contest

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/10/2021 3:57:00 AM

Sadly that's so true Harry. Good luck in the contest. Tom

Sally Eslinger

Date: 9/9/2021 9:18:00 PM

Oh my, and didn’t I go out with a few of those guys! I suppose I would’ve been star-crossed had I stayed with them! One guy still plays clubs every weekend, since 19721 when I knew him…well, I guess he loves music, bless him. Good luck with this verse of emotional multi layers. Blessings to you!