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"And in this moment like a swift breath the rain came. "

Quote by _ Truman Capote, Writer

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It was a good morning until I stepped outside, and felt the cool wind and the falling rain; I could have cried, what a big pain ! Well, I shrugged I cannot just stay at home and hide, but hopes for a bright sunny day did drain; so, I just walked along with a quick stride, humming to myself a little music refrain ! But, my joy died, with a loud strain; as thunder bolts collide, and all joy is slain ! __________________________ February 13, 2021 Poetry/Rhyme/It Was a Good Morning Until Copyright Protected, ID 02-1329-315-13 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Premier contest, It Was A Good Morning Until . . . sponsor, Tania Kitchin, Judged 02/20/2021

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Date: 2/14/2021 2:25:00 AM
Love this, Constance... It's a beam of light on a dark, cloudy day such as this one. God bless you my friend,.. with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/14/2021 9:40:00 AM
Gina, thank you for the love and the comment _Constance
Date: 2/13/2021 2:12:00 PM
Nice one Constance, good use of words with nice imagery too. Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 2/14/2021 9:40:00 AM
Gordon, thank you so much for the compliment _Constance

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