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It Too

eating it all up having my way with the cake~ living on the wedge ***

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Christopher Flaherty

Date: 8/12/2020 6:16:00 PM

Sounds like having your cake and eating it

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/14/2020 11:18:00 AM

I wrote a poem called Cinderella Bell Ball Please if you have the time will you check it out if you get a chance please P.T

Christopher Flaherty
Date: 8/13/2020 4:50:00 PM

And why the hell not Exactly Weight Watchers is for wimps

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/13/2020 5:06:00 AM

Exactly! ;),

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 8/12/2020 12:54:00 AM

Clever in a mere fourteen words. You have summed up much!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/12/2020 6:32:00 AM

...tying cherry stems in knots, you know it!

John Hamilton

Date: 8/11/2020 6:55:00 AM

This is so clever Mo, you are opening my eyes to a whole new world of poetry, so much said in so few words, it is amazing! congrats on your win!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/11/2020 7:45:00 AM

I don't mind being the exception to your rule. ;), Thank you John! One of these days you'll sponsor a short form contest maybe (giggles) ...actually, I have, epigram, and noted that particularly for poets who tend to write longer pieces it is not that easy. My sieve brain just works that way.

V. Deepa

Date: 8/11/2020 6:22:00 AM

Yummy yummy cake.:-) Beautiful Senryu Mo mam.Enjoyed it..!! I believe your fine.Take care.Much love:-)

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/11/2020 7:47:00 AM

Thank you! I wish you a delicious day with a cherry on top!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 8/10/2020 9:50:00 PM

Mo - wonderful play on words in your "layers" of words! Congratulaions on your win. Now I'm in the mood for coffee crunch cake - a locally created specialty!

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/11/2020 5:15:00 AM

That sounds divine! Thank you (as I drool...) xomo

Indiana Shaw

Date: 8/10/2020 6:12:00 PM

Crumbs, you've done it again, smashed it . . . : )

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/11/2020 5:14:00 AM

:)))) + <3 = x

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/10/2020 8:47:00 AM

Congratulations on your win. "So Cute" Your pen said a lot with few words. Enjoy your win and day................

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/10/2020 11:32:00 AM

Thank you Paula! A lovely day to you! xomo

Beata Agustin

Date: 8/10/2020 7:24:00 AM

Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this..... so savoury. God bless you.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/10/2020 11:31:00 AM

Thank you Beata! Warm hugs :), xomo!

Gary Radice

Date: 8/10/2020 5:49:00 AM

Great food for thought.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/10/2020 6:59:00 AM

Thank you Gary! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 8/9/2020 11:37:00 PM

Et tu? For me Maureen, rarely sweets; so my "sitting on the wedge" is fromage. Marie Antoinette, and the Python's empty store sketch certainly would have incited me to revolt; BUT your poem has me smiling. Thank you.

Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib
Date: 8/10/2020 6:58:00 AM

Mmmm cheese. Alas I am off both sweets and cheese. Well I find my way, low sugar coconut “ice cream” and cashew “cheese”... But I do have a chocolate habit, 70% and up ;),