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It Started With A Blank Canvas

Empty sheet a blank canvas and a wall hanging a screen arras listen to me—share your journey why didn't you earn to draft a guernsey? Igniting the flame                     as a spark       ace me that initial word starting with embryonic muse roots grow first rhyme blooms sonnet maze forms moment embraced breathing life onto canvas with poetic words sprinkle spawn stopple  sizably like pregnant forebearer As the day nears It's time to soar above the wanton muse as dreams capture pure emotion if aurora rituals in the sky above monitor muse mild muster, and materialize Imbue in a surreal calmness as we peer to a unique standpoint staggering shades of the world in this era no longer hampered by our skills we forget well-trodden ways of the widespread we stand still thrust by our artistic urge we embroider a word in our daily tapestry let's roam where muses roam free past bounds of our intended identity In this expansive sphere of creativity we create we art & we question free from societal constraints by our souls we discover beauty In the depths of our dreams that we learn its actual meaning rise over routine & prosaic crafting world of whimsical wonder on wings discovering dynamic domains each brushstroke—each word we write spice our dreams bestow them smite we imprint our ideas on white paper joining dots—not molding scraper endless potential world awaits with open arms~ blank canvas beckons as we walk—our view shifts deleting clamor, skepticism stumbles this creation path gives us a voice unknown paths reveal our options in this sacred space we find solace grace sense of embrace.

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Date: 2/28/2024 7:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a creative/wonderful write/ending/shape. I really enjoyed reading this one... Have a blessed day writing away...............
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Date: 2/26/2024 11:16:00 PM
Congratulations master Sotto for your win with a masterly stroke of the pen in a form that allows to "soar above the wanton muse" and "roam where muses roam free past bounds of our intended identity" to embrace "the expansive sphere of creativity." So eloquent and expressive.
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Date: 2/26/2024 12:23:00 PM
Hi Sotto, I must admit I am not a fan of poems formatted this way... it makes it difficult for me to read.. also, I did not understand you fourth line about Guernsey.. The rest of the poem was poetic and written so well.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 2/23/2024 1:47:00 AM
- A wonderful poem .... creatively set up ... love how you end this poem, Las :) - Best wishes in the contest ... no doubt a winning poem :) - hugs
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Date: 2/22/2024 12:17:00 AM
A Great poet's journey and the wonderful poems he began writing, realizing he could venture into any aspect of life writing breathtaking poetry about any aspect of life he wished to - i started my journey the same way Lasaad, and I was fifteen at the time. We will continue our journey for we always learn, no matter our age . I should post my first poem. This poem you have written so creatively is truly a masterpiece. Keep your pencil sharp and your golden fingers nimble. Blessings my friend Jennifer.
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Date: 2/21/2024 4:26:00 AM
What a creative take on the prompt. No longer a blank canvas but one of that is designed with such creative wordplay and artistic lines flowing with such soulful and heartfelt thoughts in such a clever manner. I really love the way youv formatted the poem. And also how youv written “ as we walk—our view shifts deleting clamor, skepticism stumbles this creation path gives us a voice unknown ” how powerful and profound! The philosophical and introspective depth of this is mindblowing. BOL!
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Date: 2/21/2024 2:52:00 AM
brilliant! creative! imaginative! I felt your poetic journey within my heart and, with each brushstroke (ingenious), I felt your poetic freedom and creativity develop as societal constraints loosened their grip. These words resonated with me: endless potential world awaits with open arms~blank canvas beckons... The ending lines were soulful filling my poetic soul with appreciation for what we do...there's hope,solace, and courage on every blank page. Best wishes with the contest! Sara
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:34:00 PM
Wow.... Amazing ! You have beautifully penned the progression of your poetic journey from the start of your career as a poet with a sonnet and adding words everyday to your spun tapestry till you have grown into a man of endless potential. "each brushstroke—each word we write spice our dreams bestow them smite we imprint our ideas on white paper joining dots—not molding scraper"... So true. The formating of the poem is ingeniously done. I am sure this will bag a first place. All the Best dear friend.
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Date: 2/20/2024 10:46:00 AM
You really outdid yourself creatively in this one. My head is spinning...
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:36:00 AM
Ingenious poem with imagery and thoughts. Great work.
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:06:00 AM
Loved the way you zigzagged your poem. Incredible the way you used imagery and emotions. Your creativity is great.
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Date: 2/20/2024 6:36:00 AM
Wonderful portrait of your creativity and your poetic prowess, my friend. A fine painting of words deserving of high praise.
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Date: 2/20/2024 3:21:00 AM
Gosh, this is an incredible write, dear Sotto! Your lines made me feel immense emotions with artistic depth, every word has been layered in a way that conveys intricate feelings so effortlessly.. Many parts here made an impactful effect on my heart, compelling me to dive in the thought-provoking essence. Especially, there's a sense of liberty, quintessential essence of moments and life, that I felt in this poem. "crafting world of whimsical wonder on wings","aurora rituals " Absolutely brilliant
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Date: 2/19/2024 6:35:00 PM
Extremely clever SP I love the intriguing way you have "brush stoked " the canvas with your eloquent poem. A delight to read. Ingenious ! Well thought our and presented. All the best wishes from your pal Wen
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Date: 2/19/2024 6:34:00 PM
I like what you did with this free verse poetry, my friend. I could feel your freedom as you let your creativity take control and flowed with it. You had a lot to say, and it flowed well. I also like the way it all came together in comforting close. The blank canvas is a great way to start. Write On! A poet friend in Texas, Bill
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