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Have you ever rejected God; thinking religion is a fraud? Is hope your new reality, rejecting death's finality? Have you ever been without love, lost in a world of push and shove? And have you crawled inside your heart, cowering as it falls apart? Have you ever lost faith in things or sought to flee on magic wings? And are you filled with constant pain; dealing with life's relentless strain? Have you ever felt emptied out, stripped of every feeling but doubt? And have you broken down and cried because your fantasy dreams died? Have you ever wished life would end, feeling alone, without a friend? And does eternity scare you, 'cause you're afraid; that it might be true? (Rhyme) 5/21/2017

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Date: 3/14/2018 2:02:00 PM
So many thought provoking questions, Emile.
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Date: 3/14/2018 3:44:00 PM
Thanks Line, your visits are always welcomed and appreciated my friend, Emile.
Date: 5/22/2017 9:47:00 AM
Ah, the questions pondered in life. We all doubt ourselves. So aptly spoken, Emile!
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Date: 5/22/2017 11:24:00 AM
Thanks Kim, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/22/2017 5:46:00 AM
Powerful one... Great write... A big 7...
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Date: 5/22/2017 9:38:00 AM
Thanks Supraja, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2017 3:43:00 PM
Great rhymes Emile, makes for deep thoughtful meditation! I don't fear eternity I embrace it!
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Date: 5/22/2017 9:40:00 AM
Thanks John, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2017 1:32:00 PM
- Questions that we most know ... maybe we do not ask ... but, think about these questions ... - Deep and well written, Emile - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 5/22/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.
Date: 5/21/2017 1:22:00 PM
This is powerful Emile and filled with such important questions. :)
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Date: 5/22/2017 9:42:00 AM
Thanks Heidi, I appreciate your comments and support, Emile.

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