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It Kills Her Day By Day - Breast Cancer Awareness

Her head bald , just a teen , she was the one called , by God , at the age of seventeen . She will soon leave us , for something is in her , attacking and killing her , silent like a murmur , Room number 11 , you will see her , she cries day by day , why was she the only one ??? The virus , bleeds her heart out , each day , her soul shouts , to stop this silence within her body , for she wants to be ordinary ……. She won't be able to walk down , Her wedding aisle , To become a beautiful bride , But , everything will go , once she dies …….. Her health is deplorable , did God choose her , maybe she is a good girl , and he needs an angel …..

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Date: 11/8/2013 4:42:00 PM
such a sad poem on a tragic topic, the reader can feel the emotion through the lines...but congrats on your win in pd's contest...and thanks for commenting on my 'titanic' poem...
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Date: 11/8/2013 10:17:00 AM
REALLY FEEL SAD FOR THIS GIRL BUT LOVED THIS POEM A LOT IT'S REALLY SAD HOPE NO ONE SUFFERS THROUGH THIS PERIOD
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:39:00 PM
Saanvi, lovely impressive win................ SKAT
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Date: 11/6/2013 2:06:00 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, POET CONGRATULATION ON YOUR HM WIN --- SAANVI --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/2/2013 8:12:00 AM
- What a gorgeous poem this truly is, even if the topic is painful and sad. - Well written Saanvi ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 11/2/2013 8:27:00 AM
Thanx for the sweet visit and comment !
Date: 11/2/2013 8:09:00 AM
Very heartfelt write on the victim, Saanvi
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 11/2/2013 8:27:00 AM
Thanx for the sweet visit and comment !!
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 11/2/2013 8:26:00 AM

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