It Kills Her Day By Day - Breast Cancer Awareness

 
Her head bald ,
just a teen , 
she was the one called ,
by God , at the age of seventeen .

She will soon leave us ,
for something is in her , 
attacking and killing her , 
silent like a murmur , 

Room number 11 , 
you will see her , 
she cries day by day , 
why was she the only one ??? 

The virus , bleeds her heart out , 
each day ,  her soul shouts , 
to stop this silence within her body , 
for she wants to be ordinary …….

She won't be able to walk down ,
Her wedding aisle , 
To become a beautiful bride , 
But , everything will go , once she dies ……..

Her health is deplorable , 
did God choose her , 
maybe she is a good girl , 
and he needs an angel ….. 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 11/8/2013 4:42:00 PM
such a sad poem on a tragic topic, the reader can feel the emotion through the lines...but congrats on your win in pd's contest...and thanks for commenting on my 'titanic' poem...
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Date: 11/8/2013 10:17:00 AM
REALLY FEEL SAD FOR THIS GIRL BUT LOVED THIS POEM A LOT IT'S REALLY SAD HOPE NO ONE SUFFERS THROUGH THIS PERIOD
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Date: 11/7/2013 10:39:00 PM
Saanvi, lovely impressive win................ SKAT
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Date: 11/6/2013 2:06:00 PM
Hello PINKTOBER, POET CONGRATULATION ON YOUR HM WIN --- SAANVI --- Thank you for embracing my contest with your poem. I took my time on this particular contest, many heartfelt poems:-(... If you'd like:) stop by my latest blog "Hold My Pen While I Write." In there you will find my very own PinkTober invitation. Take Care & have yourself an awesome day... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 11/2/2013 8:12:00 AM
- What a gorgeous poem this truly is, even if the topic is painful and sad. - Well written Saanvi ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 11/2/2013 8:27:00 AM
Thanx for the sweet visit and comment !
Date: 11/2/2013 8:09:00 AM
Very heartfelt write on the victim, Saanvi
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 11/2/2013 8:27:00 AM
Thanx for the sweet visit and comment !!
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Saanvi Dua
Date: 11/2/2013 8:26:00 AM
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