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It Is the Scent of Your Soul

In my arms secure I delicately brush back your hair, Touch your skin almost imperceptibly   Your eyes vanish into mine. I feel miraculously lost in your splendor... but... it is the scent of your soul... In my arms guarded you graze my lips with slender fingers Kiss my body, soothingly knead my shoulders, you inhale my gaze, steal me, lead me to your dominion but... it is the scent of your soul... Fusion of companions luscious in the air Voices that harmonize in the sounds of pleasure Willingly unconscious in a flurry of delight On an adult merry-go-round of fervent assimilation  but... it is the scent of your soul... your beauty unmatched violet colored eyes, sun embraced hair, an unblemished china white complexion, lips that dance in sync with spring, but... it is the scent of your soul... your primal allure unparalleled that bedroom draw that you possess  your fragrant heat that screams a man's desire those womanly parts, a body perfect entices... but... but, still there is no measure. The strength of your kindness, your giving nature, your nurse like instincts, the pure drive of your convictions. I would sacrifice all else nothing matters more... it is the scent of your soul that owns me.
12~10~2014 Sponsor: Anthony Slausen Contest Name: The Scent of Your Soul

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Date: 10/23/2014 1:23:00 AM
Very passionate and romantic words that can only come from deep in the soul. Beautifully written, Maurice! Congrats on your well deserved win!
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Date: 10/20/2014 8:02:00 PM
Beautiful n mesmerising words are ur write Maurice! Congrats on huge win!
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Date: 10/19/2014 2:19:00 PM
Wow Maurice. How did I miss this one. Congratulations on your win with this beautiful poem. There's something so magical about it.
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Date: 10/19/2014 12:37:00 PM
This is excellent, Maurice; congrats on a very deserved win. So very romantic, tender and passionate. This is going to my faves. well done! // paul
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Date: 10/19/2014 3:24:00 AM
Conrats Maurice.
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Date: 10/19/2014 3:12:00 AM
Dropping back with my congrats - I remember commenting on this poem a lot lol Hugs Jan xxx
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Date: 10/19/2014 2:35:00 AM
Maurice, Congrats on another seductive write my man.
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Date: 10/18/2014 11:56:00 PM
You are known for this, as such, I am not surprised to see this master art from you Maurice;the beauty here is that the more I trust you,the more you convince me.Heartily congrats Maurice.
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Date: 10/18/2014 10:34:00 PM
Congratulations on this win Maurice. A beautifully written piece of poetry. Verlena
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Date: 10/13/2014 10:02:00 AM
May I make one more small suggestion? The last line does not flow for me. Consider putting a "that" between soul and owns. If not for my appreciation for your artistry I would not make these suggestions. You are a gifted writer my friend.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/13/2014 10:12:00 AM
Done. Thank you Richard.
Date: 10/13/2014 8:41:00 AM
I absolutely love this stunner. Consider switching primal for sexual. For me sexual lacks the subtle touch you have used in this piece.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/13/2014 8:47:00 AM
I love that suggestion Richard, in fact I thought the same thing about the word sexual but could not think of a good substitute. The word primal will be a huge improvement.
Date: 10/13/2014 7:11:00 AM
It is a fantastic romantic poem that enchants any woman's heart and soul! Perfect my friend, Maurice a seven is the least one could do!
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Date: 10/12/2014 8:14:00 PM
This one fits very well with the other poem of yours I just saw. Is it for the same goddess? Utterly beautiful, Maurice. It takes a poet of your stature to write for a contest entitled "the Scent of your Soul" because it screams romance and passion!!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 8:54:00 PM
I don't write poems that scribble above is just an excuse to horse around with Tim and Jan down below.
Date: 10/12/2014 6:39:00 PM
Oh Maurice this is fantastic, your talent holds no bounds.....Seren
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Jessica Vh
Date: 10/13/2014 4:03:00 PM
LOL at his reply!
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 8:55:00 PM
Bondage? There was no bondage...why who said there was bondage? She lied...probably
Date: 10/12/2014 5:55:00 PM
Dear Maurice, You could enter this in the "seduction" contest as well. It has elements of romance and tenderness. Who wouldn't want to meet someone who's willing to "sacrifice all else" for a loved one. Very, very beautiful, my friend. You don't need wishes of luck. Quality speaks for itself! Love, Carolyn
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 8:57:00 PM
I do enjoy romance. Holding hands, kissing...like you said tenderness.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 5:58:00 PM
Just having a little fun :)
Date: 10/12/2014 4:01:00 PM
This poetry site is becomimg an addiction....Beautiful poems ,one after an other keep coming as Im going to sleep.The title-Beautiful,the poem-exceptional.I am fsvouring it..So Fragrant :.)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 8:59:00 PM
ah, the lovely char with the tender heart. Thank you.
Date: 10/12/2014 1:07:00 PM
Yeah, lots of reads but no comments, no favs...this write is like a turnstile. In and out in a flash.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 9:01:00 PM
I'm like Shakespeare I don't write anything. Jan writes my poetry, Cas writes my prose and my plays.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 2:11:00 PM
Must have been a hot flash
Date: 10/12/2014 12:51:00 PM
Wow look at how many reads this one has..It must be good :)
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Date: 10/12/2014 11:06:00 AM
Simply scentsational Maurice:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 12:06:00 PM
oops we got that in reverse sorry Jan. Tim thinks there is no U in doble. Tim probably thinks there is no U in u.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 11:43:00 AM
there's no U in yo either I bet
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 11:42:00 AM
Tim there's no U in doble. Just ask Jan.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 11:39:00 AM
I think "reads" should at least be double quotes :)
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2014 11:37:00 AM
ha ha ha least its not my page this time! least Maurice getting lots of 'reads' of his poem this way lol:-) hugs jan xxx
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 11:35:00 AM
not a scent of it around
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 11:34:00 AM
Yes a great place to play. Wait a minute does anybody smell a soul...
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 11:27:00 AM
Glad we have somewhere to play today..lol
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 11:23:00 AM
Jimmy goes with that song "I don't care" ...the word before corn
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 11:20:00 AM
Hey you two kids get out of that apple tree.
Date: 10/12/2014 10:56:00 AM
Whew..thought this was about me until I got to the violet eyes.....A beautiful piece...hugs xx
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Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 10/12/2014 5:55:00 PM
Hmmm, do you and Maurice have something you'd like to share?? You always make me laugh, Tim.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 12:12:00 PM
As long as I don't step on the hose with my sole I'll be okay
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 12:08:00 PM
Don't forget to hose your shoes especially the souls. Wait a minute is there a U in soles?
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 12:05:00 PM
I have to go shower to get this scent off of me.
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 12:02:00 PM
Hooters are the best Tim...and their wings aren't bad either.
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Tim Smith
Date: 10/12/2014 11:42:00 AM
I'll have honey bbq....hooters are the best...hehe
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2014 11:42:00 AM
I wrote a poem called 'I like it hot and spicy' hubby said not to post it lol :-)
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Maurice Yvonne
Date: 10/12/2014 11:40:00 AM
Jan you ordered out? not that I'm saying you don't have wings...by the way I like mine spicy.
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2014 11:38:00 AM
oh heck am crying with laughter but good tears this time :-) thanks xx
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Jan Allison
Date: 10/12/2014 11:35:00 AM
LOL I am going to sit on my wings my halo is slipping :-) hugs jan xx

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