It Hurts

I am ignored.  It hurts. 
I walk along the promenade.
Relish the salt from the sea breeze,
wondering about all the people that
walk up and down, sniffing at pizzas,
hating chips cooked in burned oil.
 
A couple cling to each other
kiss and laugh, and hurry on
towards their secret tryst.
Families sit on benches green
discussing home affairs.
No one looks up or glances at me,
for I am all alone.
 
Ah, here comes an old friend.
"How do you do?"
A few inconsequential words,
off he rushes too.
Out comes a cigarette,
it may just soothe
my frayed bad nerves.
Then quickly proceed
to sit on a chair in an open-air bar,
order a beer and dream that 
before me sits a girl.
No one asks to sit near,
despite the empty chair.
 
I am ignored. It hurts.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Seeker Avatar
September 6, 2022 at 7:08 PM
Lonely in the midst of many ~ a tragedy of our times. Superbly penned, Victor.
Legros Kelley Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 6:31 PM
My heart ached in this poem; you really caught the essence of loneliness in your descriptive poem. Great job.
Kendrick Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 9:38 AM
Whoa~~ Well, this work won't be ignored because it is an emotive and expressive good work. Way to go. Thank you for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara
Anaya Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 2:17 PM
Put the protagonist in any environment and expect the same result. "Misery loves company" they say. The question is... Has he always been a loner? Does he miss someone? Is he hurt because no woman came? Great mystery, Victor. Looking forward now to more! ~Anaya
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 1:42 AM
Feeling alone when surrounded by people can leave you feeling so empty. I can relate. Holidays are the worst. They seem to drag on and on. Your sentiments in this poignant poem stab the heart my friend. I am Faving this one. Blessing you. Hugs, Connie xxoo
Fowler Avatar
September 3, 2022 at 8:00 AM
Sometimes it hurts, Victor, on those melancholy days. Other days, it is a blessing to have the solitude to think pleasant thoughts and dream your memories - and write as you so soulfully do. hugs dear Victor! Linda
Kitchin Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 7:02 PM
Victor, a sad poem, it does hurt to feel alone at times. You romantic poems are beautiful and not ignored! hugs
Lawrence Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 11:41 AM
Victor, I am so glad you turned on commenting again. I sent you an email. Thank your response about your stories. I look forward to reading soon. Being lonely and ignored feels awful. Sending love and hugs to you, Susan :)
Poet Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 9:06 AM
I owe you a lot of gratitude, Victor. It's great that you've reopened the comment window. Having no one pay attention to you is an awful experience, Victor. But a lot of people live solitary. Others find it hard to function when they are alone in a world that is quite busy. Every aspect conveys how we feel, including being ignored despite being in a large group. But know that you have a significant place in this community and that we need to put in more effort in order to make it a better place.
Rose  Avatar
September 2, 2022 at 8:06 AM
Sometimes we feel invisible to others , but its important to know that you matter and you do have lots to offer, even a smile and a chat sometimes is enough for someone who needs it just like you. a very sensitive write, very well penned, I felt it xo
Roper Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 11:08 PM
I know the feeling of it. Hugs my friend
Vaso Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:43 PM
A very poignant poem Victor, loved this read.
George Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 7:29 PM
The feeling of being lonely and ignored is a sickening feeling ! In a busy world, no one has time for another !Many might feel the same way. As a poet, I feel you are one among the most noticed . The moment you post a poem, many look on it and comment. So never be under the thought that you are ignored.
Horsman Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 6:48 PM
So sad my friend, keep up the poetry, there are many here on soup, whom love you so much.
Edmonds  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 5:29 PM
A heartfelt write Victor, so sad for you as loneliness is hard to bear. Keep smiling through and the world will smile with you… Belle
Tor Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:12 PM
A heartfelt piece Victor it makes me sad that so many people are lonely. I recommend to those lonely people to volunteer. They will meet others and make friends plus anyone that volunteers usually is a great person. Glad the comments are back on. Andrea had the same problem on her site... God bless you...
Buehler Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 1:00 PM
Loneliness and its sad effects are so well portrayed in your latest haunting tale, Victor. Nicely written. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 12:33 PM
A very sad write. An open and poignant one.
May Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 9:45 AM
Feelings of dejection are painful, but your spirits can rise again
U.D Palawon  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 8:54 AM
Oh dear friend this us so heartwrenching. Loneliness gnaws and make one so vulnerable. I've experienced some alone time. We never imagine how our emotions plays with us at different times of life. Well expressed. :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 8:51 AM
It's a horrible feeling to be ignored Victor, yet. many lead a lonely existence. Tom
M  Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 4:54 AM
Hi Victor….your comments are turned on now that’s good. I sent you an email….I hope you are doing ok? Such a sad poem Victor…..sending a cuddle…..Debx
Pandit Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 4:30 AM
Some do struggle to cope in loneliness---amid otherwise buzzing world. Every detail conveys the feelings, Victor--being ignored, in a crowd but alone.
Skelly Avatar
September 1, 2022 at 3:24 AM
Your lonely protagonist pulls at the heartstrings Victor...Delice
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