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It Happened On a Rainy Night-Collaboration Poetry Contest

Foggy mists engulfed the bright When raindrops fell throughout the night The lampposts glowed at midnights dark When sweethearts kissed at Lover's Park Soaked wet through with glistening skin Revealing all true love within Drenched and over awed by charms Entranced as held in each others arms

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Andy Chunn

Date: 9/9/2023 7:38:00 PM

Congrats on your win. Very nicely written.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/9/2023 11:15:00 PM

Thank you :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 9/8/2023 5:22:00 PM

Dear Dilly, your romantic imagery shines in the lamppost glow of a rainy night. I especially loved "Drenched and over awed by charms" - wow! sweethearts enjoying the fervent moment with wild abandon! Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlie's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/9/2023 12:40:00 AM

Thank you so much for your thoughtful comment Susan, your verse in the poem was of course excellent x

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/8/2023 12:27:00 PM

A beautiful Collaboration D. ( I told you you're on a roll) A well deserved win, Congratulations.

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/9/2023 12:42:00 AM

You have a keen eye for a winner SV, I should run lottery numbers by you really :)

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/8/2023 11:00:00 AM

Back with congratulations, DD! Blessings!

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/9/2023 12:42:00 AM

Thank you Sam, this was a sweet one to participate in x

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/5/2023 11:23:00 AM

I remember walking in the rain growing up and the sensations of being soaked to the bone. I love the comparison of being wet and cold to the warmth and total oblivion to the circumstances generated by your images! Best wishes for the contest, DD. Blessings

Di11y Da11y
Date: 9/5/2023 11:24:00 AM

Thanks Sam, always appreciate your kind and thoughtful words