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It Happened On a Misty Morning

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Oct. 2, 2023 12.50pm

It Happened On A Misty Morning Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone. As sun rays mingled with mist Our kisses could not be extinguished As cold breeze swayed with each rose We danced, then gave me ring to propose.

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Bill Baker

Date: 10/7/2023 2:57:00 PM

Now that the way to make a misty morning memorable. Congratulations! whether real or just for the contest, Len. I happy you shared the experience with us through your lovely poetry, my friend. A poet friend in Texas, Bill

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2023 8:33:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your very encouraging/uplifting comments my dear poet friend Bill. Sorry for coming only now. I was always busy at school especially before and after the final exams. We've just started our semestral vacation. Hope I can visit most of the time during this break. I'll visit you so soon ok. Thank you so much. Hugs

Christina Bowring

Date: 10/7/2023 9:39:00 AM

Dear lovely Len- what a delightful verse. So romantic! ‘as sun rays mingled with mist’ As cold breeze swayed with each rose’. Gorgeous imagery for my romantic heart and any other heart too. Loved it my dear poetic friend. So sweet like you. Have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and smiles to you xx :):)

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2023 8:22:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Christina for your insightful and encouraging comments. Sorry for coming only now because I was so busy at school. Today is the start of our sem-break. Hopefully, I can prolong my visit here. I'll visit you soon and the rest here ok.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 10/6/2023 12:33:00 PM

What a lovely write/story. I love this one. I am back after 3 weeks off the computer. I needed a rest. Have a blessed day writing away............

Len Gasun
Date: 10/13/2023 8:16:00 PM

I'm glad you're back by dearest poet friend Paula. We need rest sometimes for our health. Me, too. Just came now that we just started our sem-break. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your encouraging comments. Thank you for loving this write of mine and your loving greetings. Have a blessed day to you as well. More power and graces to you and your writings. Hugs

Sam Kauffman

Date: 10/2/2023 11:45:00 AM

So delightfully romantic, dearest Len, with a bit of a serendipitous surprise in the last line! I hope she said yes! Hope you are well. Blessings of autumn joy to you!

Len Gasun
Date: 10/3/2023 8:28:00 PM

With God's help I am, although always busy at work my dearest poet friend Sam. Now I'm taking a little bit of my time at my workplace to visit here since students are not around. Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words. Blessings to you too, this autumn season and everyday especially in your writings. God bless and best wishes always. Hugs

Daisy Meadows

Date: 10/2/2023 12:02:00 AM

A nice poem. Well done.

Len Gasun
Date: 10/3/2023 8:18:00 PM

Thank you so much for reading my poem and your uplifting words my dear poet friend Jeanette. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs

Eve Roper

Date: 10/1/2023 11:03:00 PM

Very romantic write full of imagery and feelings. Well written .

Len Gasun
Date: 10/3/2023 8:01:00 PM

Thank you so much my dear poet friend Eve for reading my poem and your uplifting words. God bless you always and your writings. Hugs