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It Happend On a Misty Morning

Wettened by the mornings dew Closely spaced where rows of roses grew Footprints stained the cobblestone Where my love and I had walked, alone Tears and roses were left behind As I remember a love defined That special night along the sand As we made love, I held your hand (The first Stanza is by Charles Messina) Edited 9/17/23

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Date: 11/1/2023 4:41:00 AM
Beautifully written, Tania. I believe this was in my winners list. I know I was juggling around with the top 10 and this was definitely one of them. I think it was "I held "your" hand that didn't work for my collab. If it was "I held "Her" hand" it would have been perfect! Thanks and worthy of a 1st place win. Hugs Charlie
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Date: 9/29/2023 9:56:00 PM
Sad, it ended on a mournful note. Great Collaboration ! All the Best Tania...
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/30/2023 4:31:00 PM
Valsa, thank you.
Date: 9/17/2023 5:49:00 AM
Tears and roses were left behind.. heart breaking lines... a deep response to Charles stanza..
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 9/17/2023 8:38:00 AM
SO, thank you.

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