It Happend On a Misty Morning

Wettened by the mornings dew
Closely spaced where rows of roses grew
Footprints stained the cobblestone
Where my love and I had walked, alone

Tears and roses were left behind
As I remember a love defined
That special night along the sand
As we made love, I held your hand

(The first Stanza is by Charles Messina)
Edited 9/17/23
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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November 1, 2023 at 4:41 AM
Beautifully written, Tania. I believe this was in my winners list. I know I was juggling around with the top 10 and this was definitely one of them. I think it was "I held "your" hand that didn't work for my collab. If it was "I held "Her" hand" it would have been perfect! Thanks and worthy of a 1st place win. Hugs Charlie
George Avatar
September 29, 2023 at 9:56 PM
Sad, it ended on a mournful note. Great Collaboration ! All the Best Tania...
Kitchin Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Valsa, thank you.
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September 17, 2023 at 5:49 AM
Tears and roses were left behind.. heart breaking lines... a deep response to Charles stanza..
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September 17, 2023 at 8:38 AM
SO, thank you.
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