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i am not a bird whose black for i am a blackbird with my lumpy back turned away from her the dying moon shadowing pale blue waters made this blackbird teary where as a bird who was black they'd be dreary but i felt the dying moon hover over my galaxy i soared closer for a pinch more i am the last blackbird facing this mountain in awe that her final thouqhts towards me were beautiful she freed the sun for the sake of the butterflies flying inside me?

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Date: 12/2/2017 4:38:00 AM
Welcome Blackbird Great pen Chante Wonderful read enjoyed it. Have a great time at the Soup James
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Date: 8/25/2010 4:12:00 PM
hmm, a blackbird...? this is cool. To avoid the " I Don't know" please check the poetry Soup forms of poetry . this is more like a free verse. I would like to say welcome to the Soup, keep your poetry pen dancing to the drumbeat of your passion and pride... you will find a lot of encouragements here... keep up the great work. Love always, Adeleke
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Date: 8/10/2010 6:50:00 PM
Yes Chante, welcome to the poetry soup. A little late, but still welcome. I saw your name on my poems. Than I remeberd your poem that passes by (OCTOBER)..lol, I added that poem to my favorite poems. New and you are already a hit with me. Wow! to the emotions and feelings one can build inside. I my self aweee my Blackbird, but our thoughts are still together. Enjoyed your poem,..p.d.
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Date: 8/5/2010 8:53:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. looking forward to many more..with luv..
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