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Melting Snowball
The technique of steadily decreasing the number of syllables by one per line, or the number of words per line. Unlimited number of lines are allowed. No meter or rhyme required.

If you should notice any spelling or grammatical errors...PLEASE...point them out to me, as I am compiling these poems for my new book. Thank you, Emile.

You'll need to examine every emotional feeling that you have ever felt to determine if they have had any long lasting impact upon your life. Fear’s a definite contender, brandishing a surefire instant impact but, fear's a temporary kind of feeling that doesn't really last. Hope's indisputable impact, gradually dwindles with time And happiness, is a fleeting feeling you’ll experience only intermittently during the course of your life. Yet, you will chase after it long after it is gone as sadness dissolves into an ocean of tears. Empathy and sympathy, cloistered within metamorphosis, into a snide smile having no real impact anymore. Hate and anger lessen in time failing to maintain control. When seeking a lasting impact on your life without a doubt it all comes down to love. (Melting Snowball) Aug. 31, 2018

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Date: 1/22/2019 10:50:00 AM
Emile, this is quite wonderful, I see you put this one in your book, Navigating . . . and I am eager to try it.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 1/22/2019 1:19:00 PM
Thank you Constance, you should try it, you have the talent my friend, Emile
Date: 9/2/2018 3:12:00 PM
Lovely, Emile. Well done.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 9/2/2018 6:19:00 PM
Thanks Line, I appreciate all you do for me my friend, Emile.
Date: 8/31/2018 1:20:00 PM
Without a doubt! Both the message and style are impeccable.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/31/2018 2:14:00 PM
Thanks so much Jesse, I appreciate your visits my friend, Emile.

Book: Shattered Sighs