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Island of Broken Dreams

Along life’s seashore grows my rundown tree, It’s roots charting a past that drains away Where branches limp no longer fancy-free To pale against one ardent summer day: Hyacinths caress me as I drag by While rainfall thaws the elder leaves which rip Hours spent with my child...when dark tides imply A troubled crest of farewell losing breaths’ grip. How dreams on an isle engulf ardor’s pact For toss of waves crashes like brittle glass, Shattering his tomorrows, now abstract That never can flowers shade grief, alas! Boney brown leaves now fall from the willow , For I’m draped in the grayest of sea-dune... Although a wind echoes our trill quite hollow This heart freezes unmoved in my cocoon. Written For Broken Wings' Contest Empty Your Soul With Words: Theme 4 Quatrain form: abab rhyme 11/21/2017

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Date: 12/9/2017 3:44:00 PM
Beautiful write, Nette ... just lovely throughout. Congratulations on your well-deserved win - blessings!
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Date: 11/27/2017 2:04:00 PM
Lovely imagery, Nette! Good luck in the contest. Regards, John.
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Date: 11/26/2017 7:19:00 AM
Nette, so beautifully penned as only you can do, you have a unique style and congratulations on your win in my contest !
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Date: 11/26/2017 1:30:00 AM
A superb first stanza that sets up the piece beautifully, all in all a fine write. Love it. Congrats, nette, Viv x
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Date: 11/25/2017 1:54:00 PM
I just love the last two lines of this write Netted, brilliant! Congratulations
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Date: 11/22/2017 9:04:00 AM
Beautifully done Nette...BW will love it...a winner already my friend...god bless...^WW^
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Date: 11/22/2017 12:37:00 AM
melancholic honey…quite beautiful Nette
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Date: 11/21/2017 4:01:00 PM
Great title, even better poem. Nature comes so naturally to your pen.
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Date: 11/21/2017 7:16:00 AM
A very sad write, I do hope this is fictional, Nette...
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Date: 11/21/2017 7:13:00 AM
Very artistic poem--every word makes an impact--best for a win, nette!
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Date: 11/21/2017 6:59:00 AM
Well written Nette. So sad and the reader can feel it ! Good luck in the contest :)
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:54:00 AM
I love “boney brown leaves”. Nicely done, Nette! GL in contest!
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Date: 11/21/2017 5:47:00 AM
This is a very sad write... I think it will do well in the contest..
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