Island Music

The sound of the conch-shell coming from the sea,
then the beat of the drums imitating the reef.
Waves thundering when they hit the boulders,
hissing menacingly as they creep
through the channel shoulders.

As the sea awakens when the tide comes in,
the wind responses by fanning the harmony
of sounds towards the isle ancticipatingly.
The tall coconut trees are the first point of impact
breaking down the hissing wind
into melodius thunderclaps.
The silent thumbing of nuts
in union with sharp-sounding cracks.
Retaliating with the unceasing chatter
of the fluttering leaves in contact.

The sound filtering down the hut where she sleeps,
caressing her face and teasing her dreams.
Even in deep stupor she begins to move in rhythm,
 to the call of the siren of the sea.
Moaning gently with hips swaying in their own way,
her hands gracefully carving routes on butterfly raids.
First the breeze then the fanning of sweet murmurings
in cascading flow, swift then controlled like drops of rain.
Sinews outstretched before the conductor in refrain,
the wand came down and the reef opened up,
to receive the crashing of the angry waves.

She awakens to find him at sea, blowing the conch-shell.
She hears his calls then the waves, the drums and the palm bells.
Moaning softly, beyond her control
swaying with the rhythm innate in her.
The music of the islands begins again.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

Poem

Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Nnoli Avatar
July 26, 2014 at 5:40 PM
This is beautiful tiaua, I feel nature here, wonderful write ,Richard
Ioane Avatar
August 16, 2014 at 3:43 AM
Dear Richard, plse excuse island timing, you are great reading and commenting on my pieces thanks so much for taking the time not once but many... lots of alofas dear friend. Tiaua.
Sietesantos Avatar
June 13, 2014 at 8:20 PM
Hi Tiaua, this enchanting piece makes me feel so nostalgic. I miss the coconut trees, the conch shells on the beach, the sea breeze, the smell of sea and sand, etc. Thanks, my friend, for transporting me to that magical place. Bravo! Kindest regards.
Ioane Avatar
June 15, 2014 at 9:05 AM
Hi again Pandita, you aresuch a good friend, I do appreciate your visiting and commenting on some of my pieces. I will be calling soon my friend, Alofas Tiaua
Kiser Avatar
March 21, 2014 at 1:15 AM
I can smell the salt spray, hear the conch and the music of the sea and islands. Wonderful!
Ioane Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 9:50 AM
Dear ML, this is way overdue. I value so much your comments as you are one of the gifted poets in Soup. Im glad you like this. Alofas, Tiaua
Kiser Avatar
March 3, 2014 at 8:19 AM
Beautiful, a flowing, beautiful piece of poetry; I love the imagery that you paint with words.
Ioane Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 4:48 AM
ML am very sorry for the lateness in replying, welcomed comments so glad you saw and understood. Again thank you. Tiaua.
Gorelick Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 7:32 AM
I love the ocean and you have described it in aa beautiful way. Your poem flows so nicely..Where are you from? Thank you for commenting on my poem as well. BG
Ioane Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 1:34 PM
Thanks for stopping by and taking time to comment. I come from a little island (a small dot on the map) in the middle of the Pacific called Samoa - and yes I am surrounded by the vast Pacific Ocean. Have a nice day BG. Tiaua.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 26, 2014 at 7:17 AM
A mesmerizing symphony of the sea that only those who understand its melody can truly enjoy! Magnificent! Please, do not give up my dear Tiaua! Start making comments to make your presence known and things would move along! You have what it takes to make your poetry known!
Ioane Avatar
February 27, 2014 at 5:17 AM
You are a real angel dear Demetrios, again, I appreciate your comments very much, thanks for understanding. I have been reading and commenting as you suggested, getting more confident. As the saying goes :"nothing happens without the sweat of thy brow." I aim to stay, thanks-many 'alofas' from Samoa. Tiaua.
Get a Premium Membership
Turn off ads, get more exposure for your poetry, and get more features with a Premium Membership.
Book: Diverse Voices: The Poetry of Human Rights and the Pursuit of Peace